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One Hot Stud
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One Hot Stud

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This story is great, in the future I would like to see some comedy just to lighten the mood sometimes. Remember, more emotions makes it a better story.

BTW~ Mbt can you read my story and tell me how it is so far?
Its my first story and I would like to know if it is any good. If you could spare the time I would greatly appreciate it. Its called: In His Eyes

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07-Aug-2007 06:04:49 - Last edited on 07-Aug-2007 06:06:46 by One Hot Stud

Venmi

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Both blades hissed with magical energy as we clashed them continuously. I still didn’t see what the difference was between using magic and not. The only difference was that I was using magic, which didn’t seem stronger to me.
“Come on!” Zamorak yelled. “Try to move your blade fast, or I’ll move mine fast and it’ll hurt like hell. So I suggest you attack me with more strength then before.”
Suddenly, Zamorak moved his blade like a blur, something that was impossible to see. This time, I saw it, and blocked it with almost equal speed, and then gave Zamorak a wound in the shoulder.
“Wow!” I exclaimed, so surprised that my speed and strength was that high. “That’s the possibility of strength I really possess?*
*Yes it is?” Zamorak said, the blood slowly disappearing, and the wound stitching itself together. “I can** believe you gained that much strength so fast! Now, it’s time to work on magic. Are you ready!?”
“Yes I am,” I said, calmly for some strange reason.
“Then let’s get to work.”
~~~
“Prepare to fight!” Jaldar exclaimed, his blade up high, ready to slice them both in two. James raised his axe, and moved with quick speed, his axe and Jald**** blade colliding at fast speeds. Jaldar flew backwards, landing hard on the ground.
“Come on, can** you fight any better!?” James exclaimed. “You seem pathetic now.”
“Watch this scum!” Jaldar spat. He raised his arms, and froze Dan, and then he had the ice shatter, which then smoke appeared. Jaldar smiled, and James’s mouth dropped wide open, shocked that as fast as lightning, Dan was destroyed.
“Dan! No!!!” he screamed, tears flooded out of his eyes, for his best friend was destroyed in seconds.
*What?” Dan said, appearing from the smoke, completely unharmed.
“What?!” Jaldar repeated loudly, his face turning as white as a frightened ghost. “Impossible!”
~~~

09-Aug-2007 19:06:21

Venmi

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Sorry, I can't really write much right now. I'm having writer's block, and I forced myself to write this, for I'm leaving for the weekend and won't be able to write. Please keep this thread bumped for me, thanks.
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