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Wow nice job Mbt w00t mbt you really should get the name "MASTER Of WRITING" Guthix is just annoying i would own him! and if i couldn't Zaros could. Keep it up Mbt can't wait for next part i want to see want happens to Zamak.

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07-Sep-2007 03:02:56

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It was around winter in Relleka. All of the fremmeniks in the village were trudging through the thick blanket of snow which covered the already ice patched ground, trying to get what needed to be done, done
CORRECTION- Capitalize Fremmeniks.
“You mean Jidana!” she interrupted. I was then grabbed by the ear and pulled downstairs. “No daydreaming until you get all of your chores done.” “Yes mom,” I said sulking.
CORRECTION- Split paragraphs!
He had a staff with two pointy ends on the top and was wearing.
CORRECTION- Wearing what?
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She winced with the pain that I give to her every now and then.
All of a sudden, four green barriers appear around us and a man in green robes appeared. He changed forms a ton of times so I couldn’t tell his physical appearance that well. He walked over to Zamorak and Saradomin.
CORRECTION- Actually, Guthix is an It, ever-changing and no gender. Zamorak and Saradomin are MALES, but Guthix is an It.
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“This was not a dream,” Zamorak said with mesmerizing eyes which put me in a deep trance. “Guthix is not your friend. He just wants the world to be the way he wants. He doesn’t care about anybody. Don’t let him get ahead. And lastly, we exist to destroy good. Destroy the good in the world. Destroy Saradomin. Destroy Sarah.” He laughed really hard.

“Yes father,” I said still in a trance. “Good,” he replied. “Now leave.”
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07-Sep-2007 03:06:34

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I never sleep with a shirt on so I was very cold when I got out of bed.
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We barged into the doors of another house to see what kind of blood we can splatter. I snickered as I saw a woman roughly 16 sleeping. “Get some nice women blood splattered all over the walls huh,” I said. “No,” Jaldar said. “No?” I asked very confused. Smiling, Jaldar continued. “We want more than her blood. Let’s take her heart out, and stick it to the end of that blade of yours.
The sound of that almost made me puke. Trying to keep myself cool, I just continued talking. “How do you suppose we do that?” I asked. Jaldar snickered. “Listen fool, my water will rip the heart out of her throat, and then you stick it through the blade.” “Very sick and sinister,” I agreed. “Let’s do it.”
Without warning, I picked her up, and smashed her face against the wall. She didn’t scream or anything, she just piped her mouth up. “Put me down, pig!” she snapped. *Oh, beautiful, I don’t think we’re going to put you down,” Jaldar said. Jaldar was suddenly slapped and she broke free of my grip. “That’s it &^*@#, you’re going down,” Jaldar said cracking his neck.
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Looking outside the house, we see a load of Fremmeniks. Some are holding weapons, others are not. I can see some that were at Waterbirth Island; seems the news got to them and they came back. “Jaldar, what can we do?” I asked in fear. He snickered. “Just follow my lead,” he said.
We walked out of the house and put our hands up; I was just following what Jaldar was doing. “Good,” one said, coming over. He was surprised when he saw me, I didn’t know why now. “Son, is that you?” he asked me. “Who the hell are you talking about!?” I spat. “You don’t remember me?” he said. “No!” I protested. “Jaldar, do something!”

07-Sep-2007 03:07:06

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Suddenly, the man was pushed back with the others by ice and then a huge box of ice surrounded them. A huge sheet of ice appeared over the top, trapping them. Water started flooding in, drowning them, but some came up to the surface, unharmed by the sudden flood of water. “That isn’t working!” I protested. “Shut up and just watch!”
“How is that for you?” Jaldar asked grinning, thumbs up. “Nice job!” I exclaimed. “There’s just one more thing I will do.”
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We decided that our next attack will be in Seer*s village. I calculated how long it’ll take to walk and it’s about two days our travel will take. Jaldar was a bit impatient after walking for 3 hours along the same path.
He goes to an apple tree and starts picking some food. “I’m hungry,” he said. “Want some?” “No,” I replied sitting down under a different tree and resting. Jaldar ate a few apples like a monster and then felt weird after.
“I feel a presence,” he said. “It’s probably just the wind,” I said. “Let’s just keep walking.”
Yeah that’s right I’m following you,’ the same woman on top the house at Relleka thought. “Karen, are you alright,” another person said to her. Her violet eyes watered and the wind blew her blonde hair. “Demecrio, it’s alright,” she replied. “I just miss my family so much. They were so good to me even though I’m elven and that guy had to ruin it.”
Demecrio sighed, and then looked at her with more thoughtfulness. “I’m elven to as you can tell so I can understand.” He paused. “Actually, I’m an elf/human hybrid, but listen, my family was killed by his monster father. I’ve lived in the forest alone for 14 years. I was only 7 when I saw them die.”
Karen then jumped and looked at him oddly. “Just how old are you anyway?” she asked. “21,” he replied. “Yikes!” she yelled.” You seem like you’re my age in elven years.” “I age slower than humans, but a lot faster than elves,” he explained. “That explains a lot,” she said.

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Demecrio started jumping in the trees and called out to her. “Quick, we don’* want to lose them!” “Alright, I’m coming!” she yelled back.
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Sarah walked over very confused. “I do not want to kill them. You’re forcing me to.” “I’m not forcing you to my dear,” Saradomin said as he massaged his beard. “It’s just that good requires you to-” “See, that is what I mean!” she interrupted. “Good requires this; good requires that, I’m sick of it! I do things because I want to! I want good in the world, not because good wants itself there!"
Saradomin became grumpy and then sat down. “I wish I had mind controlling powers like Zamorak,” he mumbled. “What?” Sarah asked. “Nothing,” he said hurriedly. “Get going now.” “Yes father,” Sarah said.
Karen stopped suddenly, causing Demecrio to stop and wonder. “What’s the problem?” he asked. “There’s someone following us,” Karen said. “Really?” Demecrio asked dumbfounded. “I thought we were following people.” “Someone is following us to!” Karen snapped. “She’s right you know,” someone said right behind them.
Karen looked and saw a brown haired woman, roughly 18, with dark blue eyes and white clothing. “Who the hell are you and why are you following us?” “Such language,” she said. “My name is Sarah, and I’m following you so I can help you kill Zamak and Jaldar. You want them dead don’t you?”
Karen was shocked and then looked at her weirdly. “How do you know I want them dead?” she asked, sweat beading her face. “Because I’m Saradomin’s daughter and he can tell that you want them dead,” Sarah replied.
Demecrio walked over to see the commotion. “Hello Sarah,” he said. “I overheard you and Karen talking so that’s how I know your name. You ready to kill Zamak and Jaldar?” “Yep,” Sarah replied. “Good,” Demecrio replied.

07-Sep-2007 03:08:14

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“Zamak, I’m sure I feel a presence, no wait, now it’s three,” Jaldar said. I was starting to get angry now. “It’s nothing. Just get over it!” I snapped. “Actually it is a big deal,” someone yelled.
I looked over and saw three people on top of a tall tree branch. Two of them looked like elves, but when I saw the third person, I was shocked. “Sarah!” I spat. “We meet again!” “Yes,” Sarah sneered. “Now it’s time for you to die!” “Yeah!” Karen and Demecrio exclaimed.
I looked at Jaldar and he looked back at me. “Let me get Sarah and I’ll let you deal with the elves,” I said. “Fine with me as long as I get to spill some blood,” Jaldar replied. He then sneered. “I have something funny to show you,” he told me.
Suddenly, a sheet of ice appeared behind Sarah and the elves. It pushed them clean off the tree branch and they fell right on their faces, with their bodies pointed up. I laughed very hard. Sarah got up, cracked her neck, and held her nose. “Dirty tricks!” she spat. “Now you’re dead.”
I brought up my blade as she ran to me with her blade out. We clashed and suddenly were constantly switching blade motions. The sweat slowly trickled down both our faces as we continued to clash.
I made the first attack by parrying the blade and trying to stick it through her throat. She blocked it swiftly with her sword and kicked me in the stomach, which sent me flying a few feet.
I got back up and wiped the blood from the bottom of my lip. “And you say dirty tricks to me!” I exclaimed. “I’m not doing any dirty tricks,” she said. “I’m just using something other than my sword to attack you. Zamak, this isn’t a sword duel. This is a fight to the death!” “A fight to the death it shall be!” I croaked.
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07-Sep-2007 03:08:43

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“Two on one, this doesn’t seem fair,” Jaldar said comically. “You killed over 500 fremmeniks in like two minutes. How can you say that this isn’t fair?!” Karen snapped. “I was kidding!” Jaldar exclaimed. “Geez, can*t you people get a joke?” “Joke!” Karen spat. “This isn’t a joke!”
Demecrio put his hand over Karen’s mouth, which kept her quiet. “Let’s just kill him now!” “Fine,” she said.
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“I’m just going to get this over with so I don’t have to waste my precious time!” Jaldar exclaimed as he created an open box of ice around Demecrio and Karen. The sheet of ice that’s supposed to cover the open area up top appeared a few feet above and started descending slowly as a torrent of water started to flood the box. Karen and Demecrio just smiled. “Let’s show them elven speed and agility.
Like lightning, Karen and Demecrio disappeared from the water-filled open ice box and were suddenly behind Jaldar. Demecrio took out his sword and slashed a gashing and very bloody wound in Jalda(c)r's back. Jaldar screamed in pain as he fell on his knees. “Yes, we got him!” Demecrio exclaimed. “I’ll get the finishing blow!” Karen exclaimed. “Be my guest,” Demecrio said leaning against a tree.

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“You cannot hit us!” Karen bellowed with confidence. “Elven agility cannot be beat!” “Ok, whatever you say,” Jaldar said. He brought his hand up, and then down. The ice darted towards Karen and Demecrio, looking for blood.
Karen and Demecrio were swift as the large amount of ice started darting towards them. Karen just moved her head to dodge a few. She had to move her body around a bit to get past a few more. Demecrio had to do the same thing. After they were all shot, Karen smirked. “See, I told you that you couldn’t get us.” “Look again,” Jaldar said.

07-Sep-2007 03:09:12

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