hell there m b t s c *,
I think your story is the best I have ever read in a long time. In my opoion, this story should be sent immedatly to a publisher and made into a real book. It is that good my friend. It would make a great book, and loads of kids and adults would probably love it. It has great twists, non stop action, suspense, and great use of words to make the story come to life! Hec, it could become a move, it would be sold out! I just want to thank you for the great story and keep it up. Please write more soon and take your time, no one is going to preasure you.
Thanks for reading my comment and have a splended day!
06-Dec-2007 23:15:03
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