Thanks, Auro. It was my first story here, and you've given me some things to improve on.
Saren's plan at Trollheim? That was the plan to get through the gate. He got Kaisen and himself captured in order to pass Troll's Blood Pass. I didn't know that was unclear. My fault.
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