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28-Dec-2009 20:00:52

B Liver

B Liver

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I understand your argument, but i completely disagree. Anyway, your intro really caught my attention and had a clear thesis statement, nice brah; but you sort of lost me in your body paragraphs, they lacked the necesary support, but as i went into your conclusion, i felt that it really summed up the overall argument and even pushed it into a farther topic.
In general, cool story bro.

28-Dec-2009 22:17:05 - Last edited on 29-Jan-2010 06:29:33 by B Liver

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