If your words were aimed to disturb
Then your silly attempt was quite absurd
You must have just gotten out of jail
You're out of practice! Your poetry = fail.
In fact, I laugh at your tangled pink 'do
I'm sure that it upsets you too
I couldn't live with hair so disturbing
Your face is also quite unnerving!
Ode to Ariden:
So much hostility is directed at you!
You made 'I Am A Liar' speak what is true!
Have you any self control
or have you none to be found ?
You must like being trolled
when you act like a clown
Yes we all do smile -
when we think your are through!
Yet, I can freestyle
and write nice-r poetry, too.
Real poetry
is gentle and yet kind
Your word debauchchery
is cold hearted all the time!
Rap can be poetry
when its handled right
But whatever you've tried -
You better just say good-night!
Ice on fire, what an interesting name
It really does intrigue me
It really is unique, I've never seen the same
This isn't my best poem so please do forgive me
Though your hair hair isn't my favorite
It's something I will admit
it's better than my poem, I hope you forgave it
These words are all true and I simply had to say it
07-Sep-2011 07:56:57
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07-Sep-2011 08:22:40
by
madeofmaddy
ice on fire, oh my, how sweet!
You are looking for me?
Your words, what a treat!
Here, is where I come, faithfully!
I went off to other games
others saw your words too
the next avatar's name
Is 86blue!
I have seen you quite often
86blue
My words now will soften
to pay homage to you
We have both played
on games forums a bit
Even my thread I'd say
I have seen you on it
Your words, they made sense
your maiden journey was here.
You thought we would wince
Nooo..welcome aboard, dear!
.................................peace!
Bella
07-Sep-2011 17:19:30
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07-Sep-2011 17:20:36
by
MrsBellaBead
Oh, Bernalda of word you speak true
Of a poem you wrote of 86blue
Of many threads I've seen you post
Many a more then most
Your word, inspiring to my speech
Allow my poetic ability higher to reach
For you you must agree I'm better then before
At writing poems to be viewed by all
86blue
My note here's for you
Your words are sweet too
for your words, they do soothe
86blue
You have set the bar higher
Next, I must speak to
Ice on Fire
Your name lights up the page
and your words lightly flow
You've wisdom of a sage
As your words have all shown
Poetry is endearing
when it expresses your soul
In your heart there's no fear in
True warmth is not cold
Your literary style
Is quite charming & quaint!
Your words prove you are agile
as you wear the agility cape!
........................................peace!
Bella
Bernalda, what can I say when your words say it all,
They make you realize that true beauty is not always seen.
They keep you holding on to every syllable until no more remain,
It makes makes me wonder was this talent made or has it always been.
Where else can I find words of that beauty, please direct me to the quote
For I need to know what can surpass what I have herd today
Your words as colorful as your hair enlighten me
But for words of beauty such as those there's nothing more to say