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Mr Vaelin

Mr Vaelin

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You all probably readin through magazines, put it down dress in rags and beanies lookin fantasy
acting like its all fun and games till you hear them put someones life in it
Even bringing up their family into this wannabe, rapper here, busted words typing like a freakin celebrity
My words are from the heart not from the mind i'll put a hole into your soul everytime you try to rhyme
These are my words all you fakers mine, mr pitbull22 has been layin low, now its time for me to shine
Picture you tryin to say a rap infront of crowd, look at my rhymes then look back at yours are you proud
Now i seen so many people considerin they own everyone without even thinkin they never known mine
So heres the unspoken words broken out like ants on a lion
You think you gotta diss me to teach me well keep tryin
I never stop i dont even need a break with my mind and soul guiding me im here to take
I been tryin forever even though my life was at stake so no worry i dont gamble my life i take what they cant make Unflawed Pk, im sorry man if i mean any disrespect no need to pray im just here to say do you live upto your name
I know on the game you could ask me to come wildy playin cowardly husslin me so your pixel player can rustle me
its all the same, i dont like to diss anyone with a means to a song but honestly all you said on that page was all wrong i got what it takes thats why im always going strong your just another busted wanna be so you should move along,
So talk, you fool you think im terrible? read my words, undestand them too, no hesitation when it comes to conversation head held up high while you sorrow like a tool.

01-Jul-2011 15:34:12

HeckImBack

HeckImBack

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Everyone on this thread, really worship my feet
'Cause I'm starting to shine once I'm getting that beat
I'm becoming all divine; oh wait, I ALWAYS am
Don't tryna f'ing touch me, b'ch I raised Eminem
There is no way to beat me other than rhyming your way
To a successful rap song, that's how you can make me pay
Okay you got me, I was just joking the whole time
Tryna get your hopes up, and then crash them while you climb
Son you can't beat me no matter how much you try,
I created this thread,
You can sit down and cry,
'Cause you're a new kid, ameteur, you know nothing 'bout this,
You say you're pro? I say your rap is worth my p''iss.
Everybody wants a tip, they all want an advice
They wanna taste my rap muffin
They all want a small slice
But I ain't giving nobody even touch my talent
'Cause I'm the only person here with the awesome gallant
Here I go another day, just being ordinary
Rapping against new fighters and it's extraordinary
Just shut your mouth and back off before you damage your health
I'll make you so embarrassed you'll want to burry yourself.

01-Jul-2011 18:05:22 - Last edited on 01-Jul-2011 18:06:30 by HeckImBack

Mr Vaelin

Mr Vaelin

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your words are so 1980's man but atleast you tried
You even had to edit your own rap, aint that a suprise?
I was minding my own theme rapping my own dream now you open your busted mouth and pulled me into this scene
You cant keep pace with the lyrics i flip my words are worth more then anything you spit dont try to threaten me up in this sht i took threats enough to know when someone dont know when to quit..
You say im not pro and okay maybe im not but look at your own rhymes what the hell do they got?
maybe if you quit ragin you'll know what you forgot
Take a second to read my rhyme learn your lesson with who your messin and maybe i will stop
You can try to diss anyway, anyday all you can, cause you suck for someone who says they rose eminem
I know a liar when i see a liar understand?
Its obvious your desperate to be the better man
You aint gettin nothing outta your little ragin taking seconds to pause between every sentence makin first impressions blur to me like a grown mans adolescence now bow to my presence cause i cannot stop stressin how much people try hard and get nothing but tension give nothing but a reason for me to keep dissin and let them understand the meaning of rhymin with a morale hearing so lets take a look at the crap you been revealing
Its extrodinary fighting against new fighters i disagree cause there is a reason why im still standin here
You and anybody else would know that you have lost brother But you wont stop cause you a persistent mother f----ker
Back off before i damage my health makin alot of sence using words you should be doing yourself every morning i put your name right on my shelf wakin up and willin to know how you felt when you read this damagin pile of wealth bringin you on your knees makin you worship only yourself no followers, no points no reason to even give a comeback you might aswell quit while your still intact cause im just warming up i got alot ready to strike back if you try to give another reason for me to come back.

01-Jul-2011 19:46:39

HeckImBack

HeckImBack

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@Pitbull
I wonder how long it took you to write that
Trying to give me words, but receiving your own splat
I'll be sittin' here, wearing my top hat
While I watch you, the newf''g getting on top of that,
Tip number one, you write to f'ing much,
Tip number two, shut up and get in the hutch,
This isn't so amusing as I thought it'd be,
You're trying too hard to be the king bee
You can't take my throne though unfortunately.
No matter how much you write,
I'll always have the light,
No matter how much you fight,
You'll never be on my sight,
Tell me son, are you 12 years old?
'Cause your combacks are
As you've been already told
You ain't going far
Your rap stinks, ain't impressing anyone,
You say nobody likes me? Sit back and listen, son
They all adore my image
Wanna kiss my feet
I'm so much better than you, there's no point to compete
Once I open my mouth, you will start to retreat
Give us all a favour and go back to the street
You're not as good as you think,
Stop being full of yourself,
Trust me you're gonna sink
Like the titanic itself
You both have something in common, you and the ship
Both got drown by a small thing, in this case my flip
I know the type of guys like you,
You think you've made it through,
But everyone else is like who the f'k are you
You're not welcomed in here,
Unless you change your style
It's so f'ing hostile
I'll give you a tip, on how you can start
Shut the hell up and admire this work of art.

01-Jul-2011 20:34:27 - Last edited on 01-Jul-2011 20:36:24 by HeckImBack

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01-Jul-2011 21:18:01

Mr Vaelin

Mr Vaelin

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@ Glitters
There you go again editin your own rap it sucks so bad we both know its crap
How could i impress no one when Da Bell replied back
Statin my rhymes are good what you got to say to that?
Callin me a 12 year old is really smart and funny when even if i was means you got burned by one buddy
Put your self esteem major ego down people kissin your feet theres nothin you got you clown
But stated as you brought me back with more tension to make this sht more sencing while readin your rhymes pulled out from born legends makin me feel like im wastin my time on a wanna be whos stressin
So now when you feel you had enough you say im not welcome in here
But people take a second to look and you can tell that was said from fear
Aint no body hustlin me or startin me only persistent with little resistance child bustin in tears
Give you a favour and go back to the streets its so common Your runnin out of ideas pullin words from your ass non stoppin
let me guess you play call of duty pistols poppin commander pro noob silent **** marathon runnin
I say all i say without stoppin i never need a break from what im plottin so you can read this and start un doin the little drama you got brewin with me involved and yourself noob tubin stop frontin
Im the illest and realest right up in the spot what the f-k do you got? you got the shamest and lamest words right from the start makin no sence pullin in things from every direction just for it to fall apart
Nothin you say can even burn me buddy you even showed it i been layin down my side people actually even heard it maybe im new that part is true but you know im worth it you should stop tryin and give in cause you know i earned it
learn it when your dissin someone your moral is to burn it make a section indicatin that you learned it put in my name as a referance so people see who taught it pitbull is the name dont forget it
Im 21 just so you know it before you make another failed diss and show it
Side note: Thanks Da Bell lol

02-Jul-2011 04:50:47

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