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Nop Rs

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^^ idk Noah it looks fine to me? Are you making your art in notepad? If so, make sure it is in verdana 10. Also check to see what zoom your browser is at.

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Nice cube. Proper shape. Two things I might say, not really mistakes per se, but ways in which I think you could improve.

Try to avoid overuse of straight line symbols like | _ - and ¯ They stick out too much from other symbols and look too disconnected most (but not all) of the time.

So instead of using llllllllllll try using ;;;;;;

Instead of using _-¯ try using ¸‹´

For your next assignment please make an aligned building with a pointed roof and a semicircle window. Any questions just ask.

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30-Aug-2014 19:05:41 - Last edited on 30-Aug-2014 19:12:21 by Nop Rs

Sir Duncan88

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Thanks for the advice. Yeah, I thought that shading on the right side of the cube looked a little off, mostly because there were gaps near the corners.

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Hope this is OK.

01-Sep-2014 16:33:42

Nop Rs

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Yea looks good!

I'll give you two assignments now, because I think I'm going to be pretty busy this week.

First: Fix the censor in my post at the top of this page. Figure out how to keep the "Ok, one sec" above your drawing without it censoring.

Second: Draw an unaligned refrigerator. Use basic shapes and keep it simple (Avoid curves). Use contrasting.

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02-Sep-2014 01:21:03 - Last edited on 02-Sep-2014 01:24:03 by Nop Rs

Sir Duncan88

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^ Ok, one sec.

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02-Sep-2014 17:52:19

Sir Duncan88

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Fridge;

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(It actually looks more like a cupboard...

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