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Chrisn44

Chrisn44

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Thank you, Glow. I appreciate your support in the story, but I don't think we'll need you to write anything right now; if need be, we will certainly ask for your assistance.

As for Zack, that was amazing! I'm not even sure I can write that well now. You certainly made the beginning much more detailed and interesting. Great work! I can't wait for this story to continue on like this.

01-Jul-2010 17:37:23

Hyro Silver

Hyro Silver

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Hey Glow, long time no see! My writing has improved, I hope. I'm noticing that one chapter might be more than two or three posts... made me laugh xD I wish you could write more in your posts. Well now I'm going to continue writing. Right now I'm just setting the base of the story I guess and then Nhoj and I will get into an RP style, I think.

01-Jul-2010 22:08:16

Hyro Silver

Hyro Silver

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Chapter II-
A New Name and New Home

A shout was heard from the Black Knight Castle north of Falador past the trembling mountain range that reigned over the battlefield of the warring sides. The gates were opened and an unknown corpse wrapped in a black cloth was thrown out into the darkness. Varesa had lay in the bushes on the outside, shaking from the events that clouded her sense of reason. She looked up into the sky and took a deep breath. "Guthix, forgive me, forgive my ignorance! I know you are a merciful god, and I love my son so, but I fear Iban and his father. What should I do?" She waited in silence and heard no answer. "Guthix, why have you abandoned me in my hour of need?" Varesa cursed the ground and took out a sheet of papyrus she had kept for magic. She began to write and finished quickly, hoping even though there was no light that someone could understand it. She tucked little Riku into a small blanket and she ran under the coat of darkness towards the gate.

"Someone's out there!" A shout broke the silence that she so longed for. She set Riku down at the gate and ran out into the darkness, an arrow suddenly missing her head. She turned back when she felt safe and a tear fell from her eye. She mouthed a quick Guthix blessing and disappeared into night.

The gate suddenly opened and a guard in black armor ran out. "God I hope it's not a witch, such a pain." He turned around to go back in when Riku suddenly began to cry. He screamed and turned towards the baby after quickly unsheathing his sword. Another guard behind him burst into a wild laughter. "You scared little boy? Get back to your post I'll take care of... this thing." The guard saluted and walked away. The other guard bent down and checked the baby and found a note. He frowned. "Get the captain."

He began to read the note while he waited for him. The captain came walking out. "What is it Figreid?" Figreid stood up and saluted. "Sir there's... a baby and a note."

02-Jul-2010 01:00:42

Hyro Silver

Hyro Silver

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Chapter II-
A New Name and New Home

The captain motioned for him to read the note. Figreid cleared his throat. "This is the son of the infamous Iban, son of Zamorack. His castle was attacked and his soldiers killed, along with his own life ending at the face of battle. His son, named Riku, has been left with no choice but to be raised in this castle under Zamorack principles and up-bringing. Riku may hold the fate to win this war, keep him sa... keep him sa... the rest is unreadable." The captain nodded and waved him away. He picked up the baby and started to walk in when a dark figure approached him.

"What is that?" The dark figure continued to approach the captain. "Oh, Lord Hyro! Sir this is Riku, son of Lord Iban, we just received news he was killed in battle and his castle is under siege." Hyro looked at him and nodded. "This isn't good, captain get back inside the castle and warn the others that an attack might be on the horizon."

An arrow struck the wooden gate and made a sound that broke the silence of the castle. Hyro turned to the darkness and shook his head. "Idiots." He unsheathed a black 'demon' sword. "Everyone on guard!" He withdrew into the castle and a loud war cry came like a wave out of the darkness, shattering the low morale of the castle. Hundreds of white spots were now visible in the darkness running towards the castle. Giant fireballs flew out of the darkness from hidden spots, hitting the castle walls and gates, destroying the stone walls and opening the castle for attack.

The White Knights ran towards the castle and entered screaming, prepared for battle. The Black Knights, some still getting on their armor, died gruesomely under the horrors of war. Hyro was in the castle courtyard, twelve bodies lay around him dead, stabbed and slashed in different ways and places. He looked towards the approaching army and smirked. His eyes flashed red, revealing his demon bloodlust. He jumped forward and began attacking them one by one.

02-Jul-2010 01:33:26 - Last edited on 05-Jul-2010 05:22:44 by Hyro Silver

Glow250

Glow250

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Starting to remember the story now. So Riku was the son of Varesa and Iban... its like I'm rediscovering and enjoying the stories over again! When does Goku appear? Could always look at the original... but that would ruin it. ;)

02-Jul-2010 20:47:48

Riku Zerati

Riku Zerati

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Hahaha, good to see you guys again. The writing is spectacular. Glow! Goku! Its been a while eh?

I must say Goku your writing has improved a great deal :P ..I have so much to say but first, thanks.. Im so glad you guys had enough love for this story to continue it with or without me (my connection has been down awhile and Ive had to go over to my friends house just to play my PS3 ** ) . I have to thank Hot beast for contacting me via ps3.

I really am loving the story so far btw..I was 12 when I wrote this.. in 9 days ill be 16..Wow, just wow..

So how is everyone?

04-Jul-2010 01:16:48

Chrisn44

Chrisn44

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WHAT ABOUT ME?!...Eh, w/e

Blacky! (hehe) Your Back! Man, it's been so long. I must've been 12 when we started this story, but now I'm 16 (17 in 5 months). And yeah Zack (Goku) has improved a lot! I was so amazed that he could write that well. I'll probably be rusty when I start, but oh well.

Oh, and btw, Blackriku, I heard that you have a facebook. If your already friends w/ Nhoj on there, search for Chris. You should find me then. I don't wanna reveal any other personal information, so you'll have to get Nhoj's facebook profile name by other means if you're not friends with him already, and also Zack's facebook too. I'm sorry I can't say much, but it's to keep us safe, y'know?

Anyways, glad your back and I hope you can find us on facebook.

04-Jul-2010 04:28:46

Chrisn44

Chrisn44

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*h, it's alright. I think Zack's got something planned at the moment, so you don't have to write anything now.

I know in Mexico they had to deal with a hurricane, so that's why he hasn't been online to finish the chapter (internet was down).

Anyways, think about the facebook thing; it can really help us communication wise.

05-Jul-2010 04:49:47

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