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Umm. . .

Hmm . . .

Bonk!

And thanks.

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31-Aug-2007 23:02:39

That's a nice story--a good elaboration of a theme. I think it was a 'bit' clipped, but that's just my humble opinion. Alot of times, shorter is better .


~Tom

31-Aug-2007 23:05:07

02-Sep-2007 19:00:29

Thank you, Cathode Star. I felt it was just getting worse and worse as I kept writing, so I decided to finish it. Perhaps some time I'll get around to making it a bit longer.

I'll miss you, Guess.

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