forums.rs

Forums

I'm Trapped

Quick find code: 49-50-96-26643121

of 91
Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

Posts: 3,830 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Hello.

This is Shadsassin asking you to please join the Break Free From Controllers Movement (B.F.F.C.M). I'm a member of this orginization and I think you should be as well. Surely you've been annoyed by your controller before? You know it all, being made to kill things, wear weird clothes, and sometimes eat things that should just have been quietly buried. Sometimes the controllers even make you change your gender (I've seen some very unhappy accounts named "Jim" or "Tommy" with a girl's chest and little blue outfits).

So help us get rid of controllers forever, making it so you can live a normel life in this lovely (even if the trees look kinda funny) land of RuneScape. First, however, I'll tell you how I joined.

I was walking about in the waiting place, just looking at the waiting-placeness of it all, when my friend Will1232123 came up to me. He had been telling me about the Break Free From Controllers Movement yesterday, when he was suddenly logged in and I didn't get to hear the last bit of his talk. Well, he was looking very unhappy at the moment.

"What's the matter?" I asked, "Controller make you kill a dragon or something?"

"No," he sighed, "I heard my controller tell some other controller that he was going to give me a gender-change. I'm really quite worried about it."

I wasn't sure what to say, so I said nothing. He didn't seem to mind though.
Suddenly he brightened up.

"Hey, I told the movement guys about you. They asked for me to bring you over."

"Sure." I said. After all, this movement thing might really work, and if it did, it'd be nice to have helped.

He took me over to a knot of accounts, all arguing about something. One of them was arguing with such warmth that she was going a bit blue, and this was the one that Will1232123 brought me to.

"Hi," she said, swivling about on her heel when she saw us, "who's your friend, Will?"

"This is Shadsassin. I told you about her yesterday, remember? She's interested in joining."

14-Oct-2006 21:54:01 - Last edited on 29-Oct-2006 19:23:45 by Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

Posts: 3,830 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
He was going to say something else, but noticed that the girl had turned her attention to the group, where a girl with spiky brown hair was trying to twist off the head of a tall man with long grey hair. It was hard to say who was winning, but they both looked annoyed.

Now a third party had entered the fray, a pale man with red hair who was trying to seperate the combatents, but not doing the best job at it. The spiky-haired girl was now trying to keep the red-haired man on the ground and hit the other man at the same time. The gray haired man was also kicking the red-haired man, but was trying to bash the girl with a shoe.

Through the whole thing another girl was screaming. She was just standing there, looking at the battle, and screaming. She looked like she was having fun. At long last (or so it seemed to me) one of the battlers stuck a foot out and kicked her. Now that she had something to yell about, she fell over and stopped screaming.

The first girl (I know it's confusing, but keep reading to the bit where I learn their names. It's gets less confusing then) ran over to the fight and started yelling herself.

"Anne! Joppi! Get off Tain! Stop it!"

At this point, the spiky-haired girl and the grey-haired man hit each other at the same time, and both of them fell over and stopped moving.

The first girl helped up the red-haired man, who looked a bit woozy. He began walking in circles, and the girl came over to Will1232123 and I.

"Sorry about that, sometimes Anne and Joppi disagree," she acted at though this was normal, "but don't worry, they'll be fine. Now what's your name?"

"Shadsassin."

"And your controller is?"

"Emily."

The girl entered something in a book, then turned back to me.

"You're in then. I'll tell you who everyone is OK? Let me know if it gets confusing."

"Sure." I said.

14-Oct-2006 21:54:32

Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

Posts: 3,830 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
"OK then, I'm Pip, I'm also the leader, more or less. That over there is Tain, the one walking in circles. The two who were fighting are Anne and Joppi, the girl is Anne and the boy is Joppi. The girl who was yelling is Katlin. Those two who look exactly the same, and who are talking each other, are Will and Will, they're twins. You already know this Will."

"Got it." I told her.

"Another this you should do is pick another name, that is, if you don't like yours. We all have, and it's nice to be called by a name that you actully like."

I thought about it. I liked my name, but I had allways thought it a bit long. Finally I came up with something.

"Call me Shady."

"Alright," she said, holding out her hand, "welcome to B.F.F.C.M."

"B.F.F.C.M?"

"It's a shortened version of Break Free From Controllers Movement."

"Oh, OK."

And that's how I came to be a member. It's quite fun, and we are helping the lives of all accounts! Don't you want to be a part of this?

If you do, then just ask one of us about it. You should be able to find us, we're growing in popularity by the moment.

Well, there we go.

Shady

14-Oct-2006 21:54:51

Joppi J

Joppi J

Posts: 9,081 Rune Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile
Just a suggestion, but it might be a good idea to progress the story a bit from the existing characters points of view. The story is basically dragging on with letters from different people. If you continued the story, just keeping the current characters you have, and make the rest of it letters from them, that might break the cycle and might just make it a little better. I'm just saying that the plot is moving pretty slowly with a new character coming in every add, it might be better to elaborate with what's happening with the current characters.

15-Oct-2006 01:28:53

Quick find code: 49-50-96-26643121 Back to Top