*surfaces from a mound of words and stray letters*
I'm not finished yet, but I would--
*mumbles something about reverse psychology*
Do *not* write Nildi Two. At all. No plot development, no story snippets, and no mention of the characters. Ever. Doing so would make me *extremely* annoyed.
But I must say, I thought when Nildi abandoned that Pony, it would return in the cli-max to save the day - much like Jongor and I-forgot-how-to-spell-her-name did.
I was wrong, but I still loved the story.
Thanks again.
15-Jan-2012 13:09:32
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15-Jan-2012 13:10:31
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Nuada
It's a good point about the pony. It really should have reappeared at a critical moment and thrown a wrench in the works one more time, possibly to unwittingly thwart the bad guys.