Currently working on this story
Hello and welcome, I would like to thank you for reading my story, and giving me feedback, I am planning on (hopefully) having some feedback as i go, and when i am ready for the final chapter, i will move everything to one thread, making it easier to read.
Before we get started, ill do my best to try and give a few outlines of some of the characters. (updated as i go)
The king - An old man, feared by many, hated by even more. One of the richest people in the world, and not scared to gloat, he is always looking of places to conquer and take control of. He is a single man, his wife dying to disease years ago, people think this is why he is so angry all the time.
Beast - One of three brothers, and the eldest. Skilled with a sword, or anything long and sharp he can swing. He is a kind hearted young man, around the age of 18, he will do anything to help his father take care of his family. Including risking his life trying to steal of loaf of bread here and there.
Panther - Also one of the three brothers, and the middle of the three. Unlike his eldest brother, he is skilled with anything that shoots arrows or bolts. He also unlike his brother, is a quiet young man, always sneaking around. At roughly age 16 he is labeled as a freak because his lack of presence around his peers.
Eagle - The youngest of the three, blessed with the skill of magic in his blood, is one to torment anyone he can. Levitating items just out of peoples reach, teleporting around, using his magic to steal things, sometimes to help his family, others just for fun. At the age of 14, his father worries about him the most out of his children.
The princess - A secret daughter of the king, who is skilled in stealth, and the art of healing. She is a "sassy brat" as some label who, but no one other then herself and the king, know she is his daughter.
Wyo
Mr Wyo
The Farming Slayer
29-Apr-2013 18:15:56
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