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Serene End
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I'm not sure >_>
Chapter 19: Entering the Week of the Divine
The morning sun came up. Spero stares outside from a window, he breaths in and out. "It's without a doubt the Week of the Divine. The air has this stronger feeling and I feel even stronger than I was yesterday." Spero said to himself. "Now that I've been given the power of a Full-God, I have the full confidence that I can destroy Alrous." Spero hears two knocks on his door, he looks over at it. "What is it?" he asked. "The portal is ready sir." the scholar replied. "Very well." Spero walks over to the door, opens it, and walks past the scholar. As he walked through the hallway, he pushes away all the scholars in his way. He arrives at the portal room, he roughly opens the door. Solomon, Zenovia, Claire, and Ambrotos look at Spero.
"Ah, I see. Someone woke on the wrong side of-" Solomon said.
"No. I'm just focused on my goal -- nothing else." Spero interrupted as he walked over to the others.
"Well, now that Spero is with us. We can finally leave." Solomon walks closer to the portal. "Whoever wishes to enter first may. This portal will take you to the outside part of Lumbridge."
Spero races into the portal with the others following behind him. They all appear on the outskirts of Lumbridge. They enter the ruined city. After about a few minutes, they see the Rebel Army of Lumbridge's castle. Two guards block the way. "Stop where you stand!" The guard shouted. "I don't have time to waste on the likes of you." Spero growled. He walked by the gate and threw his left arm out. The bridge underneath the guards broke and they fell into the water. Spero walks into the castle. Zenovia looks over at Solomon. "Solomon. Spero isn't acting normal; could it be by the change to a Full-God?" she whispered. "Quite possibly yes." he whispered back. They walked into the castle. Spero arrives at the main room with most of the army in there. They all look at Spero.
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Feb-2009 14:09:57 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2009 10:49:59 by Serene End

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Frederick stood up from his chair and walked over to Spero. "Hello again Spero, long time no see." Frederick greeted.
"We all need to prepare. In seven days, Alrous is reborn."
"Yes, I'm sure we all are aware of The Divine Dusk."
"Spero is the key to our victory. Since he is now a Full-God, we stand a good chance of winning." Ambrotos said.
Frederick looks over at Ambrotos and Claire. "And you two are?" he asked.
"People just call me Ambrotos."
"You mean Ambrotos the legendary bounty hunt-"
"I left that behind a long time ago." Ambrotos looks at Claire. "And this is Lady Claire."
Claire bows. "Pleased to meet you..." she replied.
"Yes, same here." Frederick looks at Ambrotos. "I'm assuming you know all of us?"
"Indeed."
Meanwhile, with the actual Dante. In the city of Wekadelf. Dante stood beside his beloved Enyo; who laid on her bed breathless. "I'm sorry I couldn't save you.." Dante whispered to Enyo. A butler walks into the room, holding a cup of tea. The butler lowers his head. "Your tea sir." he said. Dante shakes his head side to side. "If only I was able to protect you -- you wouldn't be like this..." The butler puts the cup of tea on a table and leaves the room. Another person walks into the room, it was Dante's father, Joshua Bellerophon. He sat next to Dante and looked at him in the eye. Dante moves his eyes and looks at him back.
"Look Prince Dante, we've gone through many things. And I know that this is probably the greatest sorrow you've ever felt but listen to m-"
"What's the point of having all this power and all this wealth if I can't save the people in-front of me; all I can do is save myself..."
"I have one way to save her."
Dante shoots onto his feet. "How!!?"
Joshua smirks. "Give in to the power of the unbalanced."
"Huh?"
Joshua's green eyes change to glowing orange eyes. "Give in to the power of the Unbalance God, Alrous!"
"A-Alrous!? W-what are you doing here!?"
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Feb-2009 14:18:21 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2009 10:47:57 by Serene End

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Alrous stood on his feet. "What? Are you a fool? Did you truly think you were 'reliving' your past?" Alrous snaps his left index finger and thumb together. The world around began to melt into a dark abyss. "This world is fake. Your beautiful Enyo was a fake too. You, Dante, are the only one that isn't fake."

A flash of light appeared on left side of the dark room. Dante began to hear the voice of Enyo. His eyes were widened. "This isn't the real world. It's a fake..." Alrous snaps his left index finger and thumb together, the world return to normal. "Now Dante, it is your time to become FAKE!" Dante shot up from his bed. He looks around as he panted heavily. He looks at his hands. "It was just a dream.." he said to himself. "I'll confront my father tomorrow." Dante falls back onto his pillow.

Back at the Rebel Army of Lumbridge. As the team finished their planning. A loud noise was heard. It caught everyone's attention. Suddenly, Alrous and a group of 100 Zamorakian knights and Army of the Altais knights (including Arad, Alfred, Julia, Thanatos, and Enyo) appeared. Everyone jumped off their chairs and drew their weapons.

"Why hello there, my enemies." Alrous said.

The End of Chapter 19
Next Chapter,
Chapter 20: Alrous' Message

Thank you again for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .
The end
is only
the beginning...

02-Feb-2009 14:23:58 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:43:35 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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I apologize for my lack of edits; I've been mostly getting on, bumping my quests and logging off without checking what any threads say. I'll begin editing now.
Chapter 18:
"With the letter in her left hand, she exchanges it to Alrous" just say "She hands the letter to Alrous"; it's very hard to be grammatically correct with the left hand part added in.
"Thanatos has successful destroyed the Ebony Key!" should be successfully.
"Her eyes widened with a face expression of disbelief" should be "facial expression of disbelief".
"he looks over at the left side wall" He should be capitalized.
"Love her all you'd like" should just be you no 'd.
"And I know you are about my plan but bear with me" some adjective should be by are, perhaps angry?
"As long as Enyo doesn't see that the Dante currently isn't the real one she actually fell in love with. It'll be nothing but blind affection." change to "that that Dante", remove the currently and use a comma instead of a period after "love with".
Chapter 19
"Spero walks over to the door, opens it, and walks passed the scholar" should be past.
"he pushes away all the scholar in his way" scholars needs an s.
"Meanwhile, with the actually Dante" should just be actual.
"Everyone jumps off their chairs and drew their weapons" should be jumped."
Raphael quotes:
Faust Stand-in: I R B LIKE SURGERIES. WE ARE B HAVE PARTY!
Raphael: Does this guy ever shut up?
Vexxazrin: What? I can't hear you, I had to seal my ears with magic to keep from going mad.
Faust stand-in: POTIONS B GOOD! I LIKE THE POTIONS!
Raphael: Ugh.
Meanwhile with the real Faust:
Faust: Glub glub glub?
Meph: Yes Faust, I'm quite sure the World in Flames isn't hidden in Atlantis. Now come on, those mermen are giving me the creeps and your about to run out of air.
Faust: Glub glub glub glub?
Meph: Yes you can run out of air, you still have human lungs just a dmeon lifespan.
Faust: Glub (Oh).

04-Feb-2009 01:34:51 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2009 02:27:04 by Ark Von Doom

Seph
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*starts randomly burning all of Ark's posts...or at least trying*

-An hour later-

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