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Seph
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Seph

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Great,there goes Ark...
well,at least this gives me time to introduce an old concept of mine to this thread.
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to see a story as cool as this one made into a movie?Well,chances are that that will never happen...

...but we still can make previews for this story just to see what its like!
People,I hereby re-introduce....The World in Flames Previews!
For some of them i just took quotes or peoms and such,others kinda just came to mind.
Ill post A would-be preview every now and then,so stay up-to-date on this awsum thread!
~w|gWaM126 "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

16-Jan-2009 06:13:29

Seph
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When to the sessions of sweet silent thought
I summon up remembrance of things past,
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought,
And with old woes new wail my dear Time's waste.
Then can I drown an eye,unused to flow,
For precious friends hid in death's dateless night,
And weep afresh love's long since canceled woe,
And moan th' expense of many a vanished sight;
Then can I grieve at grievances foregone,
And heavily from woe to woe tell o'er
The sad account of for-bemoaned moan,
Which I new pay as if not paid before.
But if the while I think on thee,dear friend,
All losses are restored and sorrows end.*
The World in Flames
Part Two
Divine Requiem
*William Shakespeare,Sonnet #30

~w|gWaM126 "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

16-Jan-2009 06:27:20

Serene End
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Serene End

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*Evil music starts!*

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I HAVE RETURNED!!!! I HAVE RETURNED TO DESTROY YOU ALL!!! MUHHAHAHA-

*Evil music stops suddenly?*

WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO MY MUSIC!?

Director: I could only afford the 12 word record!

WELL, THAT'S JUST WRONG!

Director: Too bad -.-

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Soooo...yeah....ummm...I'm back..

I'm glad I've returned. I missed posting here and I have been bored out of my mind. Now that business has returned, my typing mood has jumped back onto it's feet to kick the bored little noob that had plagued me. O_o

Anyways, I'll get the next chapter up today since I'm almost finished it. (I think :P )

To Wigwam: Sorry that I made your eye twitch again :o oh by the way, nice preview ^_^ (again)

To Ark: Heeeey Ark. You do realize that you got the 200th post...right?

Glad to be back ^_^ ,
The end
is only
the beginning...

16-Jan-2009 12:42:28 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:39:45 by Serene End

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Chapter 14: The Rescue
Morning had risen on this December 7th day. Everyone but Frederick was in the main room, talking or training. The door to the main room opened up. Frederick walked into the room with his hands behind his back. "Listen up everyone. Tomorrow is when we go to the raiding camp near Al Kharid to rescue Mercutio. Is everyone aware of this?" Frederick said. "Yes." Everyone replied. Meanwhile, at the raiding camp. Arad sits on a chair outside a tent with his arms crossed waiting for something. A knight peeks his head out and lets out a sigh of relief. Arad looks at the knight. "What is General Iban's decision on the prisoner?" Arad asked the Zamorakian Knight. The knight kneels on the ground. "General Iban had stated that the prisoner is going to be executed once we return to Zamorak's castle." The knight whispered. He stood back onto his feet and walked away but he suddenly paused when he heard his name being shouted out by a voice he knew all too well. Iban walks out the tent, the knight turns around as he saluted Iban.
"W-What is it sir?" The Zamorakian asked
"I need you to go with the search group to find Ravinius, he has been missing since the last raid." Iban said. The knight bowed to Iban.
"Very well, my lord." The knight runs away to the search group. Iban looks at Arad with his right eyebrow raised.
"I've got a question for you, General Arad." said Iban
"What?" he replied. Iban crosses his arms as he moved in-front of Arad.
"Do you have any information regarding General Ravinius?"
"No sir." Iban continues to stare at Arad with a loud "Hmmm..." sound. He stops and walks away. Back at the Rebel Army of Lumbridge's castle, everyone prepares for the attack. Stephanie enters her room and notices that her window was opened. She looks at her nightstand next to her bed and sees a note.
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16-Jan-2009 14:14:59 - Last edited on 17-Jan-2009 14:03:16 by Serene End

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She picks it up, she scans her eyes across the paper. But just reading a few words of the note, she gets angry. She crumbles the paper into a ball and throws it out her window. She quickly shuts the window with the blinders covering it knowing that the sun was burning her skin. She sits down on her bed with her eyes closed half way. On the upper floor in Seperadith's room, he stares out his window and lets out a sigh. He hears a door knock twice, he turns his head over looking at his door. "Come in!" he shouted. The door opens slowly, it was Sarah. She walks into the room with the door closed behind her.
Seperadith sits up from his bed. "What's the matter?" he asked.
Sarah walks over to Seperadith. "About Ravinius.." Seperadith's hands clenched up. His face expression goes a little angry.
"What about him..?"
"Are you sure that he is the one who killed our family?" Sarah closes her eyes. "I mean, he seems rather sad.."
"I'm sure he is the one who has our family's blood on his hands. He even admitted it almost two years ago." He begins to have flashbacks of the battle and the words echoed in his head "How about I tell you something. Their blood is on my hands."
"So, he really is the one?"
"Yeah."
"But he doesn't seem like the murdering type."
"Trust me. He is a killer, a cold blooded murderer."
"But can't you forgive him like Frederick said?"
"I can't. I-I...just can't..." Suddenly, the door opens up. The two look at the door, it was Ravinius. Seperadith's face expression was angered with his arm crossed.
"Listen to me. I-" Ravinius said.
"You don't have the right to speak." Seperadith interrupted.
"Fine, keep that up but whether you like it or not, I'm an ally since I'm joining your army for now."
"For now?" Sarah asked. Ravinius did not speak another word after that, he walks out Seperadith's room's door with it slammed shut behind him.
The end
is only
the beginning...

16-Jan-2009 14:28:42 - Last edited on 17-Jan-2009 14:05:19 by Serene End

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It was the morning of the next day and the group was about to leave.
Seperadith stands in-front of Stephanie. "You sure you don't want to come?" Seperadith asked Stephanie.
"I can't go out in the sun so you understand." Stephanie replied.
"Alright." Seperadith looks at Nero. "You have to stay back just in case things get ugly."
Nero sighs. "Fine.." he replied.
Seperadith hugs Stephanie and lets go a few seconds later. He turns his back, walks to the door as he waved goodbye to Stephanie. She waved back with a smile on her face. The door shuts behind Seperadith. They began to travel to Al Kharid and they arrive at the city in an hour. The city was deserted, everyone hid in their houses with their faces looking out the window giving the Rebel Army of Lumbridge dirty glares. "What is up with this place? It was so peaceful when we were here last." Frederick said. Suddenly, 40 Zamorakian Knights charge out from nowhere. "Dammit, Zamorakians!" Jikvald shouted.
"Heh, this will be no problem." Seperadith replied. His Custom elemental staff began to grow as he shot Air Wave after Air Wave; killing at least 10 soldiers. He switches his staff into his Saradomin Sword. He jumps into the air and cuts through a Zamorakian but from behind a Zamorakian was about to strike Seperadith however a lighting bolt strikes the Zamorakian. The knight laid on the ground dead. Seperadith quickly looks back, he sees Sarah holding up her Saradomin staff with a smile on her face. Seperadith looks back at the battle, he swings his sword to the left but his right arm is grabbed by a Zamorakian. Ravinius grabs an arrow from his quiver, pulls it back on his Great Bow, and shoots it at the Zamorakian that grabbed Seperadith's arm. The arrow impales the Zamorakian Knight on the side of the head. The knight falls onto the ground in a loud thud. Another man joins in the fight with his Dragon Longsword being impaled into the gut of a knight.
The end
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the beginning...

16-Jan-2009 14:35:54 - Last edited on 16-Jan-2009 14:36:27 by Serene End

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After a few minutes, the battle was over. Seperadith brushes the blood and dirt off his Mystic Robe.

"So, who are you?" Frederick asked.

"Mark. You don't need to introduce yourselves, I already know who you are." Mark replied.

"Mark, huh? Well Mark, can you tell us anything regarding the Zamorakian raiding camp?" Reid asked.

"I'll show you to the camp but that's all I'll do for you." After an hour of traveling in the desert, they arrived on a mountain sized hill of sand. They saw the raiding camp, they laid on the ground to try to not get caught. Frederick peeks his eyes to see what's happening in the camp. He sees Mercutio tied up, being carried to a teleport slab with Iban watching. Frederick launches a Air Wave at the Zamorakian carrying Mercutio. Iban looks that way but sees nothing. "Frederick?! What the hell are you doing!?" Seperadith shouted quietly. "They were about to take Mercutio to Zamorak's castle so I shot a Air Wave to delay it." Frederick replied. Down at the camp, Iban looks up at the hills with an angry look on his face. He moves his head over Arad with a cocky smirk on his face. "General Arad, go investigate the attack." Iban commanded. Arad turned over to Iban and saluted. "Yes sir." he replied. Arad quickly teleported up to the top of the hill, he immediately spots the group. The group hears the teleport and looks over to where it came from, they saw Arad with his arms crossed. They quickly jump on their feet with their weapons drawn.

"Prepare yourselves." Arad shouted.

The End of Chapter 14
Next Chapter,
Chapter 15: The Return

Thank you again for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .

(No knights were harmed during the making of this chapter)
(Okay, so maybe some were :o )
The end
is only
the beginning...

16-Jan-2009 14:46:07 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2016 23:39:47 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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I did! Well oh my that's a first for me isn't it? And what better way to celebrate than EDITS!!!
"Morning had rose" should be morning had risen.
"Everyone but Frederick were" should be was
"Fine, keep that up but either you like it or not" should be whether
"Mark. Don't need to introduce yourselves" should be "You don't need to introduce yourselves"
"They see the raiding camp, they laid on the ground" should be "saw the raiding camp"
Fik: "general arad of the tenth leigon of zamorak shall prevail and defeat zamorak and become soul ruler of evil!"
The I in legion comes after the g, and you meant sole ruler as in single not soul ruler as in spirit.
Oh no I'm correcting non-story things now too! The power of the 200th post must be giving me new power!
Raphael quotes:
Faust: Hello kiddies! Today I'm going to talk to you about something very important: Me! Or more specifically me and my friend Mephistopholes.
Mephy and I have entered a pact; an ancient art that has been forgotten in the hustle and bustle of modern Glienor. A pact is a special bond forged between any two beings, called "pact-partners". It connects them both mentally and physically; though they remain two seperate entities they can read eachothers minds, and both suffer any effects (positive or negative) that one is inflicted with. In other words someone who makes a pact with a dragon would be able to breath fire, but would be affected by dragonsbane. If one is stabbed, the other wil also be wounded and if one is healed they will both be healed.
In addition to this, they share a lifespan: when they form the pact, both of their lifespans are added together and then halved. Since Mephy is a demon and lives forever, this means I get to as well. Yay me!
A pact is breakable only by the death of one of the partners, and if ones dies so does the other. This is why very few pacts have popped up over the years.
Now you know! And knowing is half the battle. G.I.JOE!!!!

17-Jan-2009 00:10:37

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