Seeing as you left forums sort of, not sure if you'll see this comment.
Incredible talent though. Great beginning, those are always the toughest on stories ... Though, the thing with the shade in the first chapter (Or was it Prologue?) when the son kills the shade ... that his father tried to kill. It was a little cheesy with his fury and stuff, but other than that it's great!
I've only read the first five chapters, and I want to read more but I don't have time today and not a lot tomorrow.
24-Mar-2008 02:30:02