hi, i just started readin ur story, ive only read a bit but i think its great,great plot and writing, u said its sum of ur worst writing, if it is then u must be a really good writer
I just finished the tomb of guthix, awsum story, though i think the last chapter is a bit lame, the chapter before that is great! there was so much suspense i almost fell out of my chair.
im just sad its over, i wish i could read it forever.
but thats impossible so i will deal with it
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bump, hey i wuz wonderin could you check out my story, and tell me the errors and stuff ive only written ten chapters (theyre short, 2 posts each) and i need to work on my writing so i wuz wundering if u could point out my errors and give me your opinion. story is called slaughter QFC is 49-50-302-55015639
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Thanks for the support, Duko!
I've been pretty busy this weekend but I'll check it out if I have a chance!
I'm glad you enjoyed, sorry you didn't like the last chapter. This isn't my best work, if you're interested in more recent, better things, I'd be delighted if you'd look at The Death Tournament or Trap of the Necromancer. =)
I'll give your story a look when I have time.
~ Smeeze ~