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ChefChandler

ChefChandler

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Bio Format:

~Sart Copying Here~
Name: Alfro B. Awesome
Age: 18
Race: (Elf, ScapeRune Elf, Dwarf etc.) Elven Dwarf
Allegiance: (ScapeRune, Runescape) RS Baybee
Kingdom*: (Falador, the Gno(ck Alliance, etc.) Oo'Glog Destroyers
Military Unit*: (Falador White Lions, Gno(ck 415th airborne, etc. Make your own up if you want) Oo'Glog Destroyers
Military Unit Description**: Millions and millions of Ogres and Elven Dwarves together with guns such as Desert Eagles, MP4s, AK-47, Mini-Guns, 50-Calibur Plane Mounts, .45 Revolvers, and M4s.
Appearance: Young, strong, well-equipped Elven Dwarves that fly thousands of feet above the ground on jet-gliders a Dwarf designed for them, with Ground Force Ogres, who use Snipers and Surge Spells, and can also Tele, Tele-Group, Tele-Other, and use Vengeance. Basically any spells. Each of them wear Skill-Capes, plus a special Skill-Cape designed for all Max Exp'ers.
Weapons: Jet Gliders, All sorts of guns, and very strong magiks.
Personality: Heroic, Friendly, Non-Aggresive, only fights if was attacked first.
Short History: The Race was created when Elves and Dwarves battled, and a sacred egg was found on the battlefield, in which the race was born from.
Secret Word***: Jewmpaloompa
*Stop Copying Here~ I DONT WANNNNNNAAA lol jk

*If From Runescape
**If you made up your own
***This needs some clarification.The secret word is a word hidde somewhere in the story. You must find it to prove you have read the story.

Bio Status: (how many bios I need atm, if any)

Runescape: none

ScapeRune: none

16-Jun-2011 06:31:22

WolfLord7777

WolfLord7777

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There are several problems with the bio.

1. Firstly, could you please get rid of the stuff in the brackets, it makes it it hard to read to read.

2. I don't need any Runescape bios ATM

3. Oo'glog has been firmly in ScapeRune hands for 200 years.

4. I would prefer it if you stuck to the normal races, not half elves half dwarves.

5. You can't have millions and millions of elves, dwarves and ogres. Firstly, the entire garrison of Ardougne, which is about half the soldiers in Runescape, is about 600 000. Secondly, ogres are extinct and elves are almost extinct.

6. The section for describing the military unit is in the Military Unit section. The others are for describing the character personally.

7. I've actually forgotten wha the secret word is, and I can't find it, but I'm sure its not Jewmpaloompa.

If you fix these problems, and I'm happy with it, I'll definately accept it.

Thanks for being here and posting a bio, I don't get much action on this thread. :P :P :P :P :P

16-Jun-2011 08:02:05

WolfLord7777

WolfLord7777

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I generally don't like using last names unless there's a purpose, because I think its just a waste of time, but i don't think Snow really fits in with her character. Its just a bit soft and dainty for a career soldier. But I can change it if you want.

20-Jun-2011 06:11:49

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