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Novo1250

Novo1250

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Story is so good. May I make a few suggestions to Selvaria's character?
Firstly she has shorter hair that is now shoulder length.
Secondly I was thinking of changing her name to Natalya.
Thirdly she is not a lot colder aand merciless after the events in the tunnel.
And finally, I came up with a slight back story as to her origins. She is the last member of a race of super warriors capable of bending the laws of reality to her will.

Tell me what you think?

26-Feb-2011 19:49:34

WolfLord7777

WolfLord7777

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Im fine with the first three suggestions, although I think Selvaria is a better name and Im used to it now, but the last suggestion is
A. Very cliche
B. Almost impossible to implement in the story
C. Knda ridiculous
and D. Ive already been working on a lot of character stuff and this would through all of it out the window.
Thanks for the suggestions anyway though.

28-Feb-2011 07:01:43

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