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The Really Rich Noob
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~ Plot: It doesnt really have a polt but its pretty good. It hasnt really been far, but if you work on it more it can reach its full potentual. because there is not really any plot right now than that hes looking for zanaris and trying to get caviar...it isnt much.
12/20
~ Script: could be better but I like it. I think it is great wording for the characters that are in there.
8/10
* Characters: The idea of ricky mc richerthanyou was pretty good, although you could use more characters in your story. The more characters the more harder it is to manage, but it gets a better rating and more fans.
7/10
~ Comedy factor: This story was extremely hilarious I nearly fell out of my chair. I think it is great and original. Richy is completly clueless and messes with the world of runescape to make things go into chaos, and..well, its all about money.
18/20
~ Originality: Well, the orginiality wasnt completly well with the money plot, because well, noobs don't really have money and ofcource, being a noob story writer, I can tell you that many stories are on noobs not having the dough. But this noob is..rich, so it has a little originality. The involvment with the Jagex Moderators was decent.
7/10
* Spelling/Grammar: I tihk I checked everything to be well, but the all CAPS may not be very accepted all the time in the noob awards, so I should be safe on that.
8/10
~ Title originality: I think you could've done a little better on the title. I mean, yeah, Richy is the very rich noob, but, you could try to be a little more discriptive to try and get attention on that part.
6/10
~Other factor: This story is great and im glad it made it to the finals, it is hilarious but needs a bit more.
7/10
73/100 is your score for the noob awards finals. hi
12/20
~ Script: could be better but I like it. I think it is great wording for the characters that are in there.
8/10
* Characters: The idea of ricky mc richerthanyou was pretty good, although you could use more characters in your story. The more characters the more harder it is to manage, but it gets a better rating and more fans.
7/10
~ Comedy factor: This story was extremely hilarious I nearly fell out of my chair. I think it is great and original. Richy is completly clueless and messes with the world of runescape to make things go into chaos, and..well, its all about money.
18/20
~ Originality: Well, the orginiality wasnt completly well with the money plot, because well, noobs don't really have money and ofcource, being a noob story writer, I can tell you that many stories are on noobs not having the dough. But this noob is..rich, so it has a little originality. The involvment with the Jagex Moderators was decent.
7/10
* Spelling/Grammar: I tihk I checked everything to be well, but the all CAPS may not be very accepted all the time in the noob awards, so I should be safe on that.
8/10
~ Title originality: I think you could've done a little better on the title. I mean, yeah, Richy is the very rich noob, but, you could try to be a little more discriptive to try and get attention on that part.
6/10
~Other factor: This story is great and im glad it made it to the finals, it is hilarious but needs a bit more.
7/10
73/100 is your score for the noob awards finals. hi
24-Jun-2008 03:25:46 - Last edited on 26-Jun-2008 16:09:41 by NewLuvStory
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