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97swiftarm

97swiftarm

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This is making 2000 posts. Even if I have to live here for the rest of my life! HA!
Also, why wouldn't it make 2000 posts? The story is definitely good enough and with Dream, Luke and myself, who's gonna let it die?
P.S: Pun not intended.

18-Jul-2007 05:25:04

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The description in this story is brilliant but i think more speech would be a great asset to your story. Try not to add to much description and make it into a Dickens's Story. That guy really cheeses me off with too much description.
Search: Blue Moon. For my story!

18-Jul-2007 16:43:03

Roshinda

Roshinda

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Thank you for the comment.
When I'm not writing in first person I do use more dialogue, though I do love description, as it adds such a wonderful element to a story.
When writing first person, essentially the whole story is dialogue, as it all takes place in the character's thoughts .

18-Jul-2007 16:57:24

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