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Dudeski

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Hey, I like this so far! Great description n' stuff, especially with the 'cycle of his thoughts'.

Here's one thing that jumped out at me--

""His friend's father, Eiðr, had been leading a trip deep into the mountains, a voyage that would bring them >>t<< an ancient temple---""

24-Mar-2008 18:01:37 - Last edited on 24-Mar-2008 18:01:51 by Dudeski

Reaper Idoun
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Reaper Idoun

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OMFG... You can't get much better than this, I'm promoting you to...
Trainee >
Novice >>
Mediochre >>>
Experienced *
Master * *
Novelist * * *
Gifted Novelist + <- (You)
Talented Novelist + +
Owner + + + <- (Me)
Of the FAFEN (Fantasy And Fiction Expert Novelists) group. Well done!!!

24-Mar-2008 18:24:12

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