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27-Apr-2008 21:21:36

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Polly, Golden Novel's Guild has new signature borders. Now change them, the TOQ border and the GNG look ugly together!
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29-Apr-2008 00:04:10

Validus Nox

Validus Nox

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Greetings, I am Matthew3995! I will be reviewing your story, as requested
on the New Age Writers!
This is quite an interesting story. I enjoyed it, it really shows the life of the Gladiators.
Not a fun life to live, I would guess.
Voice & Emotion: 95/100

Originality: 100/100

Description: 90/100
You did describe lots, however there were times where I really wanted to know more. To be shown it.
But it was still pretty good.
Mechanics: 100/100

Characters: 90/100
You've done pretty well, but there definetly could be more. More growth, you know, stuff like that.
But again, it's not bad.
Plot: 90/100
Not much do I see the plot yet, however I do see some of it, and I am liking it.
It could be developed more, however I am certain it will be with the growth of the story!
Overall: 565/600 --- 94.17% (rounded).
I like the story a lot! It again, really does show the life of a Gladiator.
Notes: Your rank, Void Writer - You are so close to being PEEEERFECT! You can write stories without a single error! Your plot and characters are smooth
and interact well with each other! You have great description and long stories. Congratulations!
I have left blank what I do not really think I can comment on.
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(~! Do you see any thing wrong with my rating? Things I could improve on?
Please do not hesitate to let me know, because I want to do the best I can
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29-Apr-2008 01:36:22 - Last edited on 30-Apr-2008 01:16:58 by Validus Nox

Iviker

Iviker

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-=- I Rank Thee Void Writer Of The New Age Writers~ -=-
Hello, i'm 00 Pork - the leader of The New Age Writers. I'm just here to confirm your rank as Void Writer.
Here is your signature for the guild.
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I'm also here to ask, Poller, to right a short summary of the ENTIRE story. Don't include small ideas... only BIIIIG ones! This is to be added into our Library! Thanks!

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30-Apr-2008 01:25:26 - Last edited on 30-Apr-2008 01:27:47 by Iviker

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