RuneScape Forum Archive | Z is for Zombies

Juelexi

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Feel free to post and comment! ^_^

14-Nov-2011 18:39:18

Men and Mice

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Very interesting so far, Asi!

I can't wait to hear more. The only thing I would suggest is adding a little bit of action and fighting once you get past the introduction; but, it looks like an awesome story.

~DAK~

~DAK~

" All human beings should try to learn before they die what they are running from , and to , and why ." - James Thurber

14-Nov-2011 19:47:46 - Last edited on 14-Nov-2011 19:48:54 by Men and Mice

Juelexi

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bump

14-Nov-2011 22:28:57

Jul

2006

Asimato

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Sorry Juelz,
A thunder storm made connection really bad. So I didn't get day 2 posted. Will do so soon

15-Nov-2011 12:57:23

Juelexi

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whenever you can is fine

its looking good!

~BUMP~

15-Nov-2011 15:31:56

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2011

Iaito

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Nice story so far Asi, can't wait for the rest.

I don't think you'd have too many problems with the moss giants though ;o

Should be made into a future quest, zombies taking over... fun fun. Though I'm sure you'd be safe as you don't leave your caves.

15-Nov-2011 23:11:42

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2006

Asimato

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thanks guys your input is really needed. Even if it is negative its better then none at all.
Dak, there is action coming just not head bashing kind lol
And Richards this story takes place a long time ago when I really was a noob

Thanks again

15-Nov-2011 23:35:04