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Eri Vi
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Seren; goddess of nature, singer of crystals, divine aspect of the Anima Mundi, has lived in peace for many years. Her home hidden beyond the western mountains.
This would change.

Hi, I'm Daemon Garde, previously Ael Athalos, and after changing my name I decided to write this story in its honour.
Please comment.
Hope you like it. :)
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15-Apr-2010 07:02:52 - Last edited on 02-Dec-2010 23:31:27 by Eri Vi

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This one's reserved as well.


Tries out new signature...


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Hm... Could be worse. :P

15-Apr-2010 07:03:05 - Last edited on 02-Dec-2010 23:29:52 by Eri Vi

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Prologue

Ael rose before the sun, as he always did when on the hunt, and crawled out from under the tree’s shelter. Looking down he saw the fresh tracks of a Grenwall, its distinctive three toed imprints were sunk into the crisp, dew-covered grass. Ael hastily packed his few belongings together into a canvas pack and slung it over his back, keeping only his hunting knife and bow at hand.

After following the tracks through the dense forest for twenty meters or so they ran under some low branches, so, crawling, Ael expertly made his way further into the seemingly impenetrable undergrowth. The Grenwall lay up ahead, barely visible in the faint light, curled into a tight ball.

Without the room to use his bow, or the ability to move closer without waking the Grenwall, he had to rely on his knife. Brushing his shoulder-length, blonde hair from his eyes the young hunter reached to his ankle for his finely-honed stiletto.

While supporting his weight with one hand, and contorting his body to fit in the animal trail, he held the iron blade between thumb and finger of his other. Gradually bringing it up his side, against his tightly fitting garments, he raised it to his shoulder. Then, resting the length of the knife along the back of his hand, he threw it forwards, releasing the blade only when his arm reached its full extent.

15-Apr-2010 07:03:06 - Last edited on 11-May-2010 12:34:03 by Eri Vi

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The perfectly tuned weapon sliced through the air and, with a satisfying thud, landed square in the soft side of the Grenwall. The helpless creature’s large, yellow eyes broke wide open and from its mouth came an ethereal screech. Its small claws dug at the ground as it spun futilely, looking for the source of the attack; but it was too much.

The knife held firm as the creature's blood spilled to the ground, staining the dirt of its nest a dark, dark scarlet. The Grenwall rolled to its back, propped up by the wooden handle of the knife, and its stumpy legs kicked pathetically in the air above its head. Then, as the kicking slowed to a twitch and a final shudder went down the length of its body, the large, yellow eyes glazed over and it lay still.

Ael reached in and, grasping the worn handle in his palm, dragged the ill-fated creature from its home. A sickening crunch could be heard as he twisted the blade with precision, and it slipped out smoothly. Ael soaked the Grenwall in a nearby stream, letting the blood dilute and flow downriver, and then wrapped the carcass in a fern leaf; perfect for cooking.

Back a few steps from the river Ael was setting a fire, using the dry branches from the deceased Grenwall’s home and stones from the river to form an edge. He had placed the firmly-bound animal on a spit and it was starting to cook when he noticed thick, black smoke rising over the distant trees.

Resting the spit on a large stone he stood up. Judging the direction of the smoke by the rising sun, it seemed to be coming from Lletya. The smoke was too obtrusive to be from a camp fire, and there couldn’t possibly be a forest fire when everything was so wet...

Ael’s curiosity got the better of him. He put an end to his temporary range with a thick, grass-woven mat and hid the Grenwall under the ashes, slow cooking if he was to come back. The rest of his equipment he packed back into his bag and once again slung it over his back.

15-Apr-2010 07:03:06 - Last edited on 16-Apr-2010 10:03:02 by Eri Vi

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The hike back to his hometown, Lletya, was a short distance, but took him the good part of that morning. The path was treacherous on many counts, deadly even, to those who had not grown up in its midst. Navigating the forest its self would challenge even the most experienced of elves, let alone a man; one has to know how to find the same paths created by the wildlife, trampled down over years, centuries even, of use.

Then there were the larger animals, the bears and dire-wolves, which had evolved exclusively to kill. And if that weren’t enough, over many years of trapping both animals and their enemies, the elves had littered their forest with pitfalls, tripwires and god knows what else. So many in fact, that they too often forgot where they were placed.

But it was child’s play to Ael; as he knowledgeably jumped a wire and ducked through a gap so small most wouldn’t even recognise its existence. Yet one hundred meters or so from his home of infancy, he stopped dead in his tracks and hurriedly fell to the ground behind a fallen tree.

The dense forest had ended, the traps he had known to avoid since his first hunting adventure were destroyed. Ael slowly rose above the log, raised his bow and scouted the area. The once lush, green and brown of the woodland was no more. Monstrous trees that had once seemed unshakable were lying on their sides, the low shrubs had been cut with long blades and trampled into the ground.

But the scene was devoid of living creatures, not even the insects dared trespass into this unknown site. Ael dropped to the ground again, this time searching the earth for clues. He saw the indents of metal horse shoes, the calling card of men.

15-Apr-2010 07:03:26 - Last edited on 16-Apr-2010 10:04:04 by Eri Vi

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Only once had Ael seen a man, as it wandered lost throughout the land. He was only young at the time so, alone and unsure of what to do, he had simply followed it silently. Of course, he wasn’t the only one keeping check on this strange creature.

When it made its way to a clearing, foolishly thinking it was somewhere safe, it was attacked by a pack of dire-wolves, the soot-coloured dogs were at least eight feet long and their ravaging jaws left no mistake as to their intentions. Yet, Ael was not one to interfere with the way of Seren. So he merely watched the poor creature as it fell to its knees, muttering to itself, its entire body shaking and tears pouring down its wretched face.

The wolves circled for a moment but, not the type to prolong a kill, they leapt at the man from all sides. The obvious leader of the pack lunged for the neck, and with it firmly in his salivating jaws, he shook his head twice. With a satisfying crack the fragile bone structure broke and he let it drop, limp, to the ground.

After retelling his story in Lletya, Ael was told he did the right thing. Somehow, not in any way Ael could fathom, that pathetic little creature was actually a threat. Now he knew why.

15-Apr-2010 07:03:27 - Last edited on 16-Apr-2010 10:04:59 by Eri Vi

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The terrain had lost all familiarity, so he ran with all speed towards the smoke. It was on fire, the peaceful, nature-loving, town of Lletya had been reduced to a blazing mass. Ael ran through the charred remains of their living gate without needing to slow, even the once verdant grass was burnt from existence, leaving only the ash covered soil.

He reached the centre and stood, frozen in a mental agony like an animal before his own bow. The quiet elves of the forest, those who had once lived in harmony with nature, had been brutally tossed in a heap around their limestone well. Their bodies incinerated beyond recognition by the unbearable heat that still surrounded them.

Amid the burning timber frames could be heard the sizzling of flesh, occasionally interrupted by a pop, as the boiling liquids under the skin built up pressure and ruptured the thin, pale membrane. Clothes and hair had been reduced to dust, leaving nothing behind, the eyes poached to a fluid-like-muck that slowly leaked from the sockets.

But even this travesty could not hide the cause of death; bowls were spilled from arrow wounds, guts from the slice of a steel rapier, heads split from the hack of a battle axe.

15-Apr-2010 07:03:41 - Last edited on 16-Apr-2010 10:06:02 by Eri Vi

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Ael was beyond tears, only breathing in the hope that his family was not among the dead. Covering his face in his shirt to protect it from the searing temperature he forced his legs to carry him past the bodies, into the slowly disintegrating oven that was his home.

The rungs of the ladder crumbled at each step, yet, with determination beyond that which this situation should offer, Ael pulled himself to the next level. He looked over the balcony as the last remaining buildings creaked and then snapped, fragments flying in all directions.

Ael watched as his town fell, the smoke covering the sky offering no light, his entire world lit only by the orange radiance of the fire. The buildings fell slowly, gradually being demolished as their diminished frames buckled under the weight. Ael screamed pure agony, every muscle in his body fighting the reality, no-one had survived.

He turned and fell to his knees at the oak altar, dropping bow, knife and bag at his side. He gripped the diamond crest with both hands.

Ael’s throat-ripping shout pierced the artificial darkness, “SEREN! How could you do this to us? How could you let us die?”

He closed his bloodshot eyes and slipped to the ground. He did*’t know what he had expected, forgiveness perhaps, for not being here to help. Smoke filled his lungs and mouth with tar; he struggled to breathe as his throat congested.

Coughing feverishly he rose again to the altar, gripping the symbolic crest once more. His skin started to boil and his hair was singed to a colour darker than the black of night, raising his torn face to the unfathomable barrage of ashes above his head he swore at the goddess of nature.

“Kill me now Seren, for I can’t go on! Do not prolong my death!”

As he fell down to the blazing floor, the inferno of hell surrounding him, a calm voice penetrated his final thoughts.

15-Apr-2010 07:04:05 - Last edited on 11-May-2010 12:34:38 by Eri Vi

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“They could not be saved Ael Athalos. But you, you are different. You were not to die today.” The smoke cleared around him.

“The fire that surrounds you is nothing to that in your heart, go now young warrior, seek vengeance on those who destroyed my paradise so keenly.”

Ael raised his head one last time, and as the floor beneath him gave way, and the once shielding walls of his home fell in, the altar exploded in waves of pure light. Each colour separate to its neighbour. They engulfed him, the red, the orange, the yellow, the green, the blue and the purple; wave after wave they came, then they mixed, like paint in a pot, to create a brilliant white.

Ael felt his body lifted, though had no sense of direction, just floating for a moment in the infinite brightness. He closed his eyes, and surrendered his mortal soul to Seren’s will.

End Prologue.

.........¸.•*´¨)
.....¸•´......(..•*´¨)
¸.•´.................álevolent

15-Apr-2010 07:04:49 - Last edited on 16-Apr-2010 10:08:10 by Eri Vi

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