OMG THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!!!! 1,000,000,000,000/10
This is sooo cool it should be published as an ACTUALL BOOK!!!! No1 can come CLOSE to having a better story!!!!
btw... what does bump mean?
lol, i thot the guys head wood be ripped open by a rune 2h instead ov de tumor
Ur the best auther ever. ill break my own legs with a hammer if any other story can impress me more!!!!!!!!
I got goose bumps after the 1st kid was killed!!!
In all other storys its all "Super happy no one dies land" THIS makes me wanna scream "Take THAT Ridly Pearson!!!!!!"
Add me to the fans list!!!!
04-Nov-2008 22:59:41
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