Great story dude!
A lot of people are complaining about how it's not finished and you NEED to write more... Well I think this is a good thing. The story will last longer this way and leave you pondering over what is going to happen next.
I'm loving A at the moment. He reminds me of L from Death Note (which is my favourite anime, even though I don't watch anime anymore).
Can't wait to see how this story pieces together. Visiting your thread everyday until it is finished
And the fact they are both very intelligent, solving the 'unsolvable' and work with the police from time to time...
Are you telling me these things don't remind you of L?
Don't get me wrong I love A'* character but he does remind me of L. It suits the story very well.