That was a very, very well written story, and I enjoyed reading it very much, thank you so much for writing it.
I just have a couple small complaints. Some of the grammar and spelling were a little bit off, and I did not love the very end. I would have liked it much, much better if you were to come up with another way for the glitch to be ended.
Anyway, other than that, amazing story, it was a great read, and thank you very much for it! I'll have to go and check out your other stories now.
18-Jul-2010 20:50:40