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Infinity A8

Infinity A8

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Aah, that would have been Fate. Yes, I let that die a while ago because I didn't feel I had written it well nor had it been planned appropriately (I had no idea where the storyline was going.)
And yes, if you'll read upwards you'll notice we've gone through the Death Note thing before.

12-Dec-2009 01:24:11

Asimov

Asimov

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Very, very good story! I do see that you could go a bit more in depth on the characters and a few other things, like develop it a bit more into a full functioning novel. Ya so if you ever get time go back throw it and just maybe tweak a few things and add a bit more detail, and maybe you could send into Jagex and they could publish it, like betrayal at Falador (even thou I've never read that.).
But very good work and keep it up, i look forward to reading your other stores.
Like the plot and Character development was very good, but maybe work on setting and 5 senses (If you can do that in a game.)

04-Jan-2010 02:28:29 - Last edited on 04-Jan-2010 05:39:56 by Asimov

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