General, there isn't as a contents as far as I've seen. It shows the characters, jumps into the story, then suddenly ends. If it's in the middle of the pages you should point that out.
3 Things that come to my mind after reading this very long(my favorite
) story...
1-Holy Sh* That is one good story....
2-Kinda weird how a 14 year-old can be THAT smart....oh well....he's genius. But fourteen? woah...
3- YO ADRIAN!
-Rocky (Best Movie....EVER! Argue and have a bolt of lightning hit you via your computer
)
I hope that this story can live on forever and many other thrillers like it!
I also can't seem to ignore how this is shockingly suggesting any way or form of Durial321 influencing you in writing this story.
Swish...321
The killing out of control...
There is most likely more..I just am too lazy to find them
Oh, the 111 Massacre was actually what inspired this story. However, all parallels are coincidental and unintentional I'm afraid to say. Though good job for noticing 'cause I sure didn't. XD
Lol, GeneraI, I just still am blown away by your skills in writing stories
I hope that once I finish my stories, you'll be able to give the same compliment(probz not gonna write it for a while...too much in the making
)
(say, IF I ever finish my story...will you read it? I'd appreciate it...that is..IF I finish it
)
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