Wow, thanks for all the support! I was just about to let the thread die when I thought nobody would ever read it. I'm glad I didn't! I'll see if I can get around to posting the sequel, Demonic Flames.
"Wow, this story is very enthralling. Read the entire tale in one setting. Based off the...brilliance of this story I would recommend you join The Novelists' Guild and see what kind of rank they give you.
Reasons why I liked it:
Description and Imagery was nicely written. I could picture the house.
Development of characters was decent for the size of the story.
Extra points: The use of the demon butler's real name
that tickled my fancy
Paccy IV,
Community Outreach Department. the Novelists' guild"
17-Jun-2011 03:54:24
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