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Since I don't have enough time (Due to Homework) right now to read your story, I'll give you some tips. I'm giving you these tips in hope that they help you, i don't at all feel superior to you, I'm not a good enough writer =P
1: You really need chapters. As weird as this is going to sound, it helps the reader read your story. When he reaches the end of a chapter, he feels as though he has accomplished something, and it gives him a bookmark of where he left of if he needed to know.
2: You also need an intro to who you are, why they should read your story, a table of content, and maybe a preview of what they can expect in your story.
3: Readers are rare and scarce. It's not common for people do venture where somewhere unfamiliar to them. So you really to make friends in this forum, and hang out in author guilds. (Which you already do)
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Since I don't have enough time (Due to Homework) right now to read your story, I'll give you some tips. I'm giving you these tips in hope that they help you, i don't at all feel superior to you, I'm not a good enough writer =P
1: You really need chapters. As weird as this is going to sound, it helps the reader read your story. When he reaches the end of a chapter, he feels as though he has accomplished something, and it gives him a bookmark of where he left of if he needed to know.
2: You also need an intro to who you are, why they should read your story, a table of content, and maybe a preview of what they can expect in your story.
3: Readers are rare and scarce. It's not common for people do venture where somewhere unfamiliar to them. So you really to make friends in this forum, and hang out in author guilds. (Which you already do)
22-Feb-2011 00:40:00 - Last edited on 22-Feb-2011 00:47:46 by Reaper Ben
Chapters...I'll do that, don't know why in the first place, just turned out that way. Hope you'll have the time to read it soon
22-Feb-2011 05:17:33
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