Arbitrary
feedback from myself, keep the 'Part One' and so forth the same, but remove/modify the 'The Fall' from the Part Five chapter, it was almost a complete spoiler that she would die.
I have proposed this story as a quest for Runelabs! You can find it very deep under the Quests section. If you enjoyed my story, it would mean a lot to me if you could go and support it on Runelabs. I see this having a lot of potential in terms of the Runescape Lore and story.
The She-Wolf will rise again...
Search "The She-Wolf of Senntisten (Revised Edition)" in Runelabs for the idea, if you wish to support it.
Janos Morgan
War Priest of Zaros
May the God of Fate watch over you. Pax tecum.
Janos Morgan of Asgarnia
World Guardian of Guthix
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Guide for the Lost
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Lore Master and Quester
A look of fury, a look of pain, a look of hatred you can trust. A smile can hide anything.
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Janos Morgan
I completely support this idea. And also feel like you could turn Lyra's story into fanfiction or something. It is well written, well thought out, and has potential to be expanded on, whether it be her childhood elaborated on more, the adventures, her journey, or the battles as a member of Zaros' army.
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