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Spelling and Punctuation 5 /5
Personally I found absolutely No mistake with the Spelling and the Punctuation, and if there were they were probably very small so that no one could notice them. All together I think this was well written and carefully done.
Characters 4/5
I think the Characters were well thought up and I loved how you made the Moderators trainers for the RuneSpace community. Josh was very well described and I’m glad you put him with a friend. All together I found your Characters very well presented and though up off.
Description 9/10
The description of all the weapons and the armour was very well done and I found that this created a very good picture of what people where wearing. You also described the Main Character and the fight scenes very well. The reason I didn’t give you 10 was because you didn’t really describe Josh’s friend very well at the beginning, so I had to imagine what he would look like. Apart from that it was extremely good.
Plot 5/5
The Plot was Unique and fascinating. I Loved the way you turned all the well know towns of Runescape into Moons and how you made everything Runescape Related into something Futuristic. It has to be one of the Best Plots I have ever read and it really suits its name ‘RuneSpace’. All this is the reason I gave you a 10/10!
Extra 3/5
I gave you an Extra Three Points because as I said before this Plot was amazing and I believed it should have earned more than full marks. I also awarded you these points because of the effort you put into making the Runescape Related weapons, armours and Skills into something Futuristic.
This Was My Review and I Hope you like it
P.S I’m glad this was the first one I Reviewed
Spelling and Punctuation 5 /5
Personally I found absolutely No mistake with the Spelling and the Punctuation, and if there were they were probably very small so that no one could notice them. All together I think this was well written and carefully done.
Characters 4/5
I think the Characters were well thought up and I loved how you made the Moderators trainers for the RuneSpace community. Josh was very well described and I’m glad you put him with a friend. All together I found your Characters very well presented and though up off.
Description 9/10
The description of all the weapons and the armour was very well done and I found that this created a very good picture of what people where wearing. You also described the Main Character and the fight scenes very well. The reason I didn’t give you 10 was because you didn’t really describe Josh’s friend very well at the beginning, so I had to imagine what he would look like. Apart from that it was extremely good.
Plot 5/5
The Plot was Unique and fascinating. I Loved the way you turned all the well know towns of Runescape into Moons and how you made everything Runescape Related into something Futuristic. It has to be one of the Best Plots I have ever read and it really suits its name ‘RuneSpace’. All this is the reason I gave you a 10/10!
Extra 3/5
I gave you an Extra Three Points because as I said before this Plot was amazing and I believed it should have earned more than full marks. I also awarded you these points because of the effort you put into making the Runescape Related weapons, armours and Skills into something Futuristic.
This Was My Review and I Hope you like it
P.S I’m glad this was the first one I Reviewed
27-Jan-2007 20:56:26
Oh yer sorry i read the first 10 Posts..
I should of saidthanks for reminding me next time
I should of saidthanks for reminding me next time
27-Jan-2007 21:08:29
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