Nice add, as told before..
I have a question though, I don't exactly recall them starting a quest for White Navy...
They started the Vampire Slayer by talking to the guy at Draynor Village.
They started Doric's Quest by talking to Doric of course.
I can't recall them starting a quest, let me check...
Nope! Just as I thought, they didn't really start the quest, unless I overlooked some detail.
Last thing, I can't see a plot forming here. The first few chapters were nice, they described how runespace worked in comparison to Runescape. But we've found out how Runespace works and how the quests fit in with the story.
Unless your writing the type of story where each chapter has its own plot, I don't really see any plot or twist.
But I like the detail and description! Keep doing it!
ON RUNESPACE!
04-Oct-2006 21:35:25
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