Blackriku, if you don't mind I'd like to write a chapter, idk how to start it without you finishing ur idea, so plz finish. My idea is really good after urs.
ok, im back
sorry I haven't been online 4 a while, I've been chatting on somthing called IMVU , anyways im back and glow, Thank you very much for taking your time to read our story, I would be happy to let u in as a character (really nice bio btw). Nhoj lol that has the exact effect on me, when Im writing I picture in my head an Anime movie lolz. Chris, ok I will write again
BlackRiku had escaped, he had been trapped..by his beast within
Nhoj: There must be some way..I want to help him
Hyro: We all do..We have to get him back
In the Hide out, Ares let BlackRi*u to his normal self for a second to talk to him, but he was chained to demonic chains ( chains that stop demons from escaping )
BlackRiku: W-who are you..
Ares: My name is Ares..This is glow
BlackRiku: You are a monster!!
Glow: YOU CALL US MONSTERS!! YOUR POWER IS UNBELIEVABLE!! YOU KILLED YOUR OWN GRANDFATHER!! AND MY MASTER!!
BlackRiku: I did it to protect those I love..He was evil
Glow: SO WHAT! You fool!!
BlackRiku: At least im not a pinguin..
Ares: You will pay for that remark..
Ares chants some words, and BlackRiku is in a ball of Darkness, the ball goes away and BlackRiku is in his demonic uncotrolable form
BlackRiku: I..W-w-will not give up.. *passes out*
Back at the hotel
Jin is sleeping, and is dreaming
Dream BlackRiku is holding her tight
Jin: Why don't you come back to me :'(
DB (Dream BlackRiku): Shhh..Im here now..
Jin: But..
As BlackRiku is holding her, she notices somthing about him is changing, his eyes are gleaming red, his claws are growing, along with his power, his teeth are growing sharper, and his hair is growing longer
Jin: *gasp* BlackRiku!
BlackRiku keeps holding her
BlackRiku: I will never harm you..
Jin is smiling and crying at the same time
BlackRiku is having this exact same dream, so they're dreams are connected, but then BlackRiku stops dreaming of that, and then all around him, is nothing but pitch black, and he see's himself at the end of the darkness, behind him is light, but behind the dark him there is darkness
GB=Good BlackRiku
BB=Bad BlackRiku
GB: Light..Or Darkness..
The Song, When Im Gone by 3 doors down starts to play, I recomend going to youtube and Typing, 3 doors down - when Im gone, to get the chapter better as u read it