Doom 5500, you have an excellent story. However, I'm afraid that the quickness and pace just doesn't fit with our requirements, so I have declined you. Do not let this discourage you from writing, as I am sure (as do your many readers) that you'll make a supberb writer.
edit: nvm. Auro already accepted it
Jubelion, excellent! This is truely the writing I've been looking for for this guild. Ur in, gratz!
King Soro1, I'm afraid your story no longer exists on the forums.
Theturk55, I simply could not finish the first post because is sent shivers down my spine. What I managed to read though, had excellent style, spelling, and grammar. Story accepted!
Bbf Bb26, I am afraid your first story no longer exists, and your second didn't cut it. It is excellent in almost every way, however you cannot have a story well into first person and have it in the present tense alone. Happy Writing!
28-May-2008 19:37:05
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