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Kinboat
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Kinboat

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Bump!
I've been down there, in page 51... The horrors down there are too despicable to describe.
Oh, and the page 51 monster is a paper shredder, just so you know.
EDIT: Oh, I forgot one thing...

DEATH MUSHROOM DOODLES!
Wtf ^ O_o ......

03-May-2009 01:20:31 - Last edited on 03-May-2009 01:21:04 by Kinboat

Kothrak

Kothrak

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Chapter Five
Battle With Death
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Tyron," came Willow's voice from next to him. He felt the hilt of a sword being pressed into his hand and gasped. Willow was giving him Smyte!
But nonetheless, his fingers closed on the grip and he nodded. "I have to do this alone," he said, loudly enough for his friends to hear. He glanced at Willow.
"Good luck," she whispered, and stepped back. If he wanted to fight The Void alone, she knew she was in no place to stop him.
Tyron faced The Void, his jaw set in a determined line.
"Fool!" hissed The Void, its voice like crushed glass. "I will destroy you!"
Tyron dodged its first strike, but he couldn't avoid the tendril that shot out of it and ensnared his leg. It began to reel him in.
He desperately chopped at the long rope of darkness that wrapped around his ankle like a snake, and was surprised to see that it cut it off, rather than passing right through it, as insubstantial as it looked.
The Void seemed surprised, too, as it reeled back and hissed in pain. "What is this?! Nothing can harm me!" It launched itself at Tyron again.
He blocked the sword-stroke with Smyte and countered, cleanly slicing off what appeared to be the thing's left hand. "Wrong," he said.
The thing howled at the loss of its shadowy hand, and thrust its dark sword forward, the tip biting into Tyron's newly healed arm.
"Arrrgghh!" he screamed between gritted teeth, as pain lanced through his arm. He swore under his breath as he dragged himself to his feet.
His arm was in more pain than seemed possible. He tried to ignore it as he concentrated on his shadowy nemesis.
But The Void did not lunge forward to strike. It stood there, completely still, only a few yards away from Tyron.
Almost too late, he realized what it was doing. He swore and lunged out of the way as a tendril whipped straight toward his head. Another tendril came straight toward him, but he hacked it apart with Smyte.
But he could'nt hold off the attack for long.

03-May-2009 03:53:51

[#IXW7WHAUB]

[#IXW7WHAUB]

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I took a quick break from reading your story to post this before I forgot!
I am reading to keep up with your chronicles and I just wanted to say that you're doing an amazing job! This is by far the BEST story I have ever read on the forums and (I know how this sounds) I can totally see it as a movie in my head! You have an excellent use of words that other stories lack and I like how you 'borrow' things. It's cool how you're actually making it a real Runescape story and everything. And I also wanted to say that you have great ideas, and I think if you work on it you could start writing more stories on your own time and schedule that you could(who knows?) over a couple of months or years(writing a book is NOT easy work, not that I would know from experience, but Jane Austen and Stephen King's novels weren't born over night)maybe turn into a published book some day!
Sorry, I'm getting waaaay ahead of myself(as I often do), but just saying that you're a great writer and keep working on it!
-Ritzer17

03-May-2009 06:51:53 - Last edited on 03-May-2009 06:52:53 by [#IXW7WHAUB]

Kothrak

Kothrak

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Thank you!
=D =D =D
And, yeah, writing books is NOT easy. SO many dead ends to hit... I've started--what--four five books that all hit dead ends... Well, one didn't, but the computer hit a power surge and all 42 pages were deleted...
ANYWAY, thanks! I'm glad to hear people like the story! And I'll see about more chapters later!
:O ElEcTrObUmP!!! :O

03-May-2009 14:20:13

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