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Serene End
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Dante drops his left hand from his forehead, he looks back over at Solomon and floats in the air."Now, it's time to show true power." Dante said "I see, you're not going to hold back, I would assume. Well, don't think I don't have anything to help me." Solomon said. Dante grabs his head and a moment later, his eyes and entire body glow orange. Sheer terror grew on the faces of everyone at the sight of Dante.

"It is time...to finish this..."

The End of Chapter 20
Next Chapter,
Chapter 21: The Past Days of a Lost Life

Thank you again for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .

EDIT: The reason I made that warning on the first part of the chapter is because people getting their neck snapped is considered very violent.

(Especially since some of his bones were broken.. >.> )
The end
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the beginning...

13-Oct-2008 15:16:33 - Last edited on 13-Oct-2008 15:37:01 by Serene End

Seph
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Ggahh!!!...Must...Prevent.....Head explosion.......*Takes huge bottle of advil all at once*Phew,that was close!

"I'm just a figment of your imagination."

-Wigwam126 "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

14-Oct-2008 03:11:16

Ark Von Doom

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I thought the ugh came from the fact that they are STILL FIGHTING! Now we've got assassins going after him!? And bones snapping hardly count as overly violent (see Heroes, any episode with Sylar in it). In fact its nice to see some good old fashioned psychic bone breaking going on, because thats how Ravinius gets his leg permanently broken in my story :p

(Remember the saradominist general from his bio? Well after being captured by the enemy (zamorak) and witessing a massacre on a large scale of innocent civilians he went a little crazy. During this same massacre a Guthixian druid used a spell that made Ravinius view every murder he had ever commited from the victims point of view. This made Ravinius see the error in his ways and become "a good guy" and he even attempted to make peace between the other gods and zamorak with a council of the factions generals. The Saradominist, who was utterly shocked and disgusted by the fact that the other gods were willing to spare such a horrible army of murderers, learned forbidden magic, wiped out the enetire council except for Ravinius (who escaped with only his leg bone shattered into a million tiny pieces) and set out to slaughter all life (especially the gods) as he considers it "corrupted&quot ;)

That was a huge tangent I know but just setting the stage a bit. I'm writing the story (in which Ravinius isn't even the main character and comes in halfway through the story)now but I'm not posting it until I finish it and invent names for all the characters (which is REALLY HARD, with a cast of 3 books needing names (yes its a trilogy).
Back to the point, plz finish this battle soon.

14-Oct-2008 03:34:43

Serene End
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Well, doesn't the title of Chapter 21 give any information? It's "The Past Days of a Lost Life". The next chapter isn't about the battle (okay, maybe a little. But not a whole lot!) and that goes with part of the last chapter. Oh, did I just spoil? Yeah, seems like it, I really need to stop doing that*****;****;

Hmmm..I guess I made an owie on making the battle start too early.. Oh, well...It is what it is.

P.S: I meant when people get their neck snapped, some people consider that very violent -.-
The end
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14-Oct-2008 12:34:35 - Last edited on 05-Nov-2014 14:13:25 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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Two words: Darth Vader, Sylar, alot of secret agents when they do that grabbing the head and twisting around backwards thing.

And I thought that Ravinius and our heroes agreed to temporarily ally themselves but then he attacks Seperadith again...

15-Oct-2008 01:34:50

Seph
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Can we go ahead and post our bios for part 2 or do you want us to wait until you write the ending of part 1?

-Wigwam126 "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

15-Oct-2008 05:33:33 - Last edited on 15-Oct-2008 09:48:11 by Seph

Serene End
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Well, yeah I know. But, for the next chapter and a half we'll take a break from the battle.

Well....I suppose you can...Alrighty, you may post your bios for Part 2 but be aware, I'm not going to use them until then.

Bio Format (Use it if you want, I don't really care >****; )

Name:
Race:
Age:
Birth date(if they have one :P ):
Gender:
Which God does he\she follow?:
Weapon:
Appearance:
Personality:
Short History:
Family:

Whelp, have fun. See ya all sooner or later.


P.S: If your bio is long, you may use two posts.
P.S.S: Ark, remember. Ravinius did not accept the deal. He simply ignored the deal and ran after Dante.
The end
is only
the beginning...

15-Oct-2008 13:21:50 - Last edited on 05-Nov-2014 14:13:38 by Serene End

Kitties Rule

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my bio for part two

name:arad
race:half human half demon lord
family:his father was the demon lord agrith-naar and his mother was another demon.
items:he can summon a demon sword staff or bow all of them look like they are made from drag,and some tatterd demon armour made from the same stuff as the summoned stuff only he has them on all the time
backround information:he is human sized and shaped but he mas red skin black hair and white horns,he became half human in a tragic accident involving a human hero and a vat of mutating acid
what god does he serve?:why zamroak ruler of the demons on this plane of existance!
personality:full of anger hatred and brutal will to kill all humans for mutating him!
birth date:8th day of the 621st year of the third age (a.k.a in the god wars)
age:about 2500 years

15-Oct-2008 19:59:39 - Last edited on 26-Oct-2008 14:55:50 by Kitties Rule

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