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Caydock

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NEWS
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ATTENTION ALL WHO MAY BE VIEWING THIS THREAD!
WE ARE UNDER HEAVY, HEAVY CONSTRUCTION. BY THAT, I MEAN EDITING. THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE.
I HAVE A NEW STORY UP:
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Hi, guys! Thanks for clicking on this thread! This is a story I've been working on for about 5-6 months now.
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The story begins on page 2, but before you read it, read the rules.
Recent Add: August 25
Next Add (Hopefully): TBA

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23-Aug-2009 20:41:26 - Last edited on 04-May-2010 01:47:46 by Caydock

Caydock

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Table of Contents.
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Page 1: Info
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Post 1: Welcome, Intro and My Credentials
Post 2: Table of Contents
Post 3: Rules
Post 4: Comments
Post 5: Reader and Helper List
Post 6: News
Post 7: Character and Pronunciation Guide
Post 8: Endorsments
Post 9: About the Author
Post 10: Reserved
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Page 2: Story Begins
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Posts 1-3: Prologue
Posts 4-9: Chapter 1
Post 10: Chapter 2: Continued on next page
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Page 3: Story
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Posts 1-6A: Chapter 2 Continued
Posts 6B-9: Chapter 3
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Post 10: Chapter 4

23-Aug-2009 20:41:52 - Last edited on 28-Oct-2009 00:06:47 by Caydock

Caydock

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RULES: YOU MUST READ
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I: No flaming WHATSOEVER. I despise flaming so please don't.
II: No Spamming. If you spam then this thread will get full to fast and I'll have to recreate it again...that's no fun. So don't spam please!
III: I'm giving the bumping power to THREE people. If you're not one of them, please don't bump!
IV: If you see an error, please don't hesitate to tell me! I want the story to be flawless. (Not really a rule but it's here anyway.)
V: Please constructively criticize . No mean criticizing please !
VI: Obey the rules!

23-Aug-2009 20:41:56 - Last edited on 23-Aug-2009 21:28:03 by Caydock

Caydock

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Comments
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-This is way better than mine.
Infinante x 2/ 10 -Dragon Tart2
-Sweet story

-Ruben Luc
-pretty good guess i'll read more when more comes out - Ramen234
-Good story!

-Arcot
-Simply fantastic. -Ice T Fan
-Quite brilliantly done Caydock, I like the flow and description a lot. I've only read the prologue and chapter 1, but I'll get to the rest in my free time. - Psychotic Nub

23-Aug-2009 20:42:00 - Last edited on 14-Nov-2009 01:00:46 by Caydock

Caydock

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Reader List (People who told me they read it.)
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-Eclipse Jess
-Ruben Luc
-Ramen234
-Dave Cotrell
-Arcot
-Ice T Fan
-Final Step1
-Richboyfrodo
-Pacrat4
-King Tobytwo
-Psychotic Nub
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Helper List
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-Dragon Tart2
-Ruben Luc

23-Aug-2009 20:42:05 - Last edited on 14-Nov-2009 01:00:29 by Caydock

Caydock

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~NEWS~
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~November 3rd, 2009~
The thread's name was changed from "Realm of Mirrors" to "RoM Book 1: Chasm"
~October 27th, 2009~
The "Achievement" section of this thread has been replaced by the "News" section.
We are undergoing construction! I will mark "done" as the construction completes.
Prologue: Done
Chapter 1: In the Works
Chapter 2: On Deck
Chapter 3: Not Done
Chapter 4: Not Even Close
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23-Aug-2009 20:42:09 - Last edited on 04-Nov-2009 04:26:17 by Caydock

Caydock

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Character and Pronunciation Guide
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Cadoc (Pronounced: Cay-Dock): A young man growing up in a small village. The hero of the story.
Brandon (Pronounced Bran-Done): An old man who lives in the village. He plays a prominent role in the story. He's just so cliche it hurts...
Ruben (Pronounced Rue-Ben): A woodsmen who lives in the forest near the village.
Alaina (Pronounced Ah-lay-Nah): The daughter of Ruben. The author is not exactly sure what he plans to use her for.

23-Aug-2009 20:42:14 - Last edited on 03-Sep-2009 23:30:00 by Caydock

Caydock

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ENDORSEMENTS
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Rebellion by Caydock: 49-50-272-59440290
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Sandstone by NovelistElly: 49-50-725-57741491
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Elven Beginnings by Ruben Luc: 49-50-994-59467279
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23-Aug-2009 20:42:19 - Last edited on 16-Sep-2010 15:34:14 by Caydock

Caydock

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About the Author, Cause we're all so interested...
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Hey all.

I'm Caydock, formerly known as Cund8 (But yes, my name is currently IkranMakto to further feed my Avatar addiction!). I'm 14 years old and love to write above most everything else. I'm Head-Reviewer at the Novelists' Guild and will take a look at your story if you ask. I enjoy video games, particuarly Legend of Zelda, Knights of the Old Republic and Runescape, which I've been playing for 8 years, and I really love making movies. Trumpet is my favorite instrument and I play it. I also play Baseball, Track, and Basketball.
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Some Random Facts About Me
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I get really annoyed when people talk to me in text chat.
I don't own a phone. Big deal. 0_o
I will NEVER write a noob story. NEVER!
I want to become a published author, yet have a long way to go. But this story is my favorite I've ever written and the one I want to take somewhere.

--Caydock

23-Aug-2009 20:42:23 - Last edited on 12-Jan-2010 20:26:51 by Caydock

Caydock

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Reviews located on the thread: 2
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___...•'*'•...___...•'*'•...___The Archives of Varrock — Review___...•'*'•...___...•'*'•...___
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Opening: 13/15
Flow: 14/15
Suspense: 12/15
Impact: 13/15
Depth: 13/15
Detail: 15/10
Mechanics: 15/15
Total: 95/100
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Review from Full Circle Reviews located on Pages 30-31.
>>>Overall - 134/150, or 90%

23-Aug-2009 20:42:27 - Last edited on 12-Jan-2010 20:28:21 by Caydock

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