Well it was a fun read. It was bathed in in a mysterious and slightly surreal atmosphere which I enjoy, the word usage flowed well and easily painted a vivid and tightly constructed picture. I enjoyed this a lot, nicely done.
I will point this out for you, "...threw a silver chain that wrapped around the wereboar and held the it in place against its will..." Just needs a minor fix, was the only flaw I noticed.
Anyway, thumbs up shorty.
06-Jul-2012 07:51:46