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Azigarath

Azigarath

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Read the nine posts of story. As usual, you utilise description and wording very well, and the story finalises as the hunter defeated the pig. I know how it is when there's a larger project and then you don't feel like working on it. I'm working on two full-length projects at the moment, and I have noticed that when doing so, whenever you get bored of one you can hop to the other and have fun there. Just saying.

03-Jul-2012 21:49:17

Baron Ogre

Baron Ogre

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Well it was a fun read. It was bathed in in a mysterious and slightly surreal atmosphere which I enjoy, the word usage flowed well and easily painted a vivid and tightly constructed picture. I enjoyed this a lot, nicely done.

I will point this out for you, "...threw a silver chain that wrapped around the wereboar and held the it in place against its will..." Just needs a minor fix, was the only flaw I noticed.

Anyway, thumbs up shorty.

06-Jul-2012 07:51:46

A Mad Hatter
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A Mad Hatter

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Right. Sorta lost track of a few threads during the past few weeks so reprofiling this just to be certain i still have it >.>

" I know how it is when there's a larger project and then you don't feel like working on it. I'm working on two full-length projects at the moment, and I have noticed that when doing so, whenever you get bored of one you can hop to the other and have fun there. Just saying."
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I've been thinking about that, and you might be onto something. But I'll have to wait a week or two before figuring out if I want to do that just yet or not considering I've been dragging my feet on Onslaught's siege scenes for so damn long >.>

Ogre, fixed that and a few other flaws I also found. Thanks for pointing that out :D
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14-Aug-2012 01:41:04

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