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The Shopkeeper's Daughter
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Nice story
- Simbaha1
- Simbaha1
11-Sep-2013 01:17:22
You know you might get more if you continued writing this.
04-Jul-2014 17:58:22
Just read the two pages-ish of story. We go from an old man telling a story, a pregnancy, a jubilee, and so on.
Um, well, I just don’t know what to say for the story :/
It was a gentle story, with nice mechanics and such, but it was kinda, well, lacking in action and adventure, but obviously that’s not what the story is about. So yeah, that’s all I can, I suppose.
Anyways, thanks for not forgetting about the forum!
Um, well, I just don’t know what to say for the story :/
It was a gentle story, with nice mechanics and such, but it was kinda, well, lacking in action and adventure, but obviously that’s not what the story is about. So yeah, that’s all I can, I suppose.
Anyways, thanks for not forgetting about the forum!
06-Jul-2014 08:12:31
Thanks Azi! I was indeed a gentle story. I was ramping slowly up to some action, but I wasn't there yet. Of course at the rate of progress I make (which is like never) it'll not happen. But thanks for reading anyway! I appreciate that.
DW
DW
15-Oct-2014 03:59:42
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