I would like to know what more people think about this part of the story before I post part two.
Also, I have a plan to write this story told by another character.
thats a good idea! writing from a different perspective will definitely make the story more interesting. the more the feelings the better the story
and i think the reserves you made in the front may not be enough so maybe you should put more?
Wow, fancy forums are fancy.
Mobile version please
very nice story. I found it very interesting. And tbh I liked the story being told from the world's point of view. Makes it very original! Keep up the good work
@ 4z3y
You are right, I did not make enough reserves I plan on making another thread soon that will have enough for both parts and the story in a different perspective.
19-Nov-2011 01:23:01
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ShylyOddDoe
I can not believe how much time has passed and how much has changed. During the time I have been away, I lost the files that had this and other RS stories that I wrote and was planning to post
. I am not sure yet if I am going to try and re-write any of them, but I am glad to see this story survived and I will think about writing more.