~ Gollum3000 The Nerd, Goth, Metalhead ~
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It's not that good. Chapters are rushed. At parts you just have:
Kills villagers.
Kills crows.
etc.
Not hilarious. Comedy could be improved.
Grammar is generally good though.
5/10 - OK
~ Gollum3000 The Nerd, Goth, Metalhead ~
\~+ Do You Folks Like Coffee? Real Coffee From The Hills of Columbia?+~/
/+|'~- Hard Work Never Killed Anyone... But Why Risk It? -~'|+
~ Gollum3000 The Nerd, Goth, Metalhead ~
\~+ Do You Folks Like Coffee? Real Coffee From The Hills of Columbia?+~/
/+|'~- Hard Work Never Killed Anyone... But Why Risk It? -~'|+