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Sorry about the late chapter, I'm just not in the mood as of late. D: Forgive me.

Chapter 11: The Destroyer Part 2

Underneath the ground so heavy, the shadow of darkness, Zin, waged battle with the group from the Kingdom of Avdima. Modello charged after Zin, his leaf shaped blade traveled steady in his hand. As quick as the wind, Modello swung his blade swiftly at the shadow Zin. And as swift as booming lighting, Zin jumped to the left to dodge the attack.

His hand extends out in front of him as the evil apparition chuckled a very devilish laugh. Quickly, a ball of ruby red energy formed right in front of the palm of his hand. "Furore!" yelled Zin, the red energy quickly blasts out from his palm and out towards Modello. Modello quickly turned, facing Zin, and tilted his blade horizontal, so that it takes the blow instead of him.

The blast dashes right down upon Modello, his blade shivers and dances a weakening waltz. But as the attack just hit Modello's blade, the strength and thunder of the blast was just too much for Modello's blade to withstand. His blade cracked, sending a jolt of fear and uncertainty throughout Modello's body.

He watched as his blade blasts into hundreds of small shards of it's former self, they flipped and danced like ballerinas. But quickly, his own blade turned on him, they quickly attacked him. His shattered blade impales into his body, his legs, arms, shoulders, everywhere. But then the worst of the attack comes out like a jack-in-the-box.

Modello's body gets swallowed whole by the ruby red blast of magic, engulfing his body in the most intense pain his body has ever experienced. The blast rips of giant hole in the center of his jacket, where the bare flesh of his mid-abdominal appears. Burns started to sizzle all over his body, the wound quickly began to bleed like a shower.
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The blast bursts into an explosion, launching smoke and flames to dance together all over the room. Modello is sent flying back, the middle of his jacket was burnt off, his torso becomes covered by burns and open wounds. His withering vision spectates the blood that was his own forsaking his own body, crying out from his wounds.

His arms lifeless, unable to call them his own. His irises gaze upon the blood as it waltzed and flipped elegantly, it glittered like sea water by the flames that surrounded the room in an embrace of light. His body flies away from Zin, Modello was numb from all things around him. The pain he once felt, the hatred towards all that walked this world, the resentment he felt towards living.

His mind was empty of thought, his irises just watches Zin become smaller and smaller, until he was the size of a toy figure. The world flowed in slow motion, Modello's body charged towards the beige stone wall faster than a bullet. The only thing he could feel was the pulse of life in his chest as it began to slow down.

But then quickly, he is sent back into reality by a shockwave of pain shooting down his entire body. Modello's back slams against the stone wall, his face look blank as his body dropped to the floor. His eyelids slowly closed together as his face kissed the dirt of the dead. His faded irises watched the battling, his vision going back and forth from reality to black, from normal to blurry...

He could only watch now...

Bart readies his needle for an attack. He looked upon Forscythe with a prepared look on his face. "Ready Forscythe?" asked Bart, his lustrous green irises focused on his doll companion. He glances upon his needles, putting both needles into his left hand. His right hand quickly reaches down into his bag. "This guy doesn't seem friendly. I've got to do whatever I can to stop him."
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He grabs a lot of extra string from his bag and braces himself for any and all attacks and pain. Beyond Bart, Zin danced with Lite and his Chaotic Longsword. He quickly swings his blade at the shadow, who just disappears right when the attack was about to make contact with him. Lite's eyes widened, he thought he had it.

Zin appears right behind Lite just when he disappears. But then he felt a blade try to slash across him. Behind Zin was Richard, his teeth grit as he was unable to understand why his, or anyone's attack could not hurt Zin. The shadow turns around, facing Richard. His glowing red eyes look down upon Richard.

He quickly latched onto Richard's throat. His semi-transparent hand holds tight onto his throat, lifting him into the air like a doll. Quickly, Zin felt another blade try it's best to cut him. He quickly turned his head and saw Lite, his Chaotic Longsword just a mere centimeter from making contact with Zin.

"Do you mortals ever learn?" continued Zin. He leveled his left hand, his free hand, up to his head. He quickly swings his hand down, aiming straight for Lite's face. Zin's fist crashes down right on the bridge of Lite's nose. His fist sends surges of pain quaking throughout Lite's entire body.

His body shoots away from Zin swiftly as a cannonball is shot from a cannon. His body darts away from Zin, and he smacks right down in the dirt. His body is dragged in the dirt, his back rushes across the dirt. After the impact stretched almost fifteen feet, Lite's body finally halts in place. His body lacks motion beside the motion that he was still alive.

Zin returns his attention back on Richard, who shook and quivered his way to breaking Zin's grip but was unable to. But then, Zin began to feel more attempts at hurting him from behind. A exhale of frustration rushed out of Zin's mouth. He carelessly tosses Richard away like he was trash. Richard's back hits the ground that was a mere two feet away from Zin.
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Zin turns around, facing behind him. Behind him stood the elf, Varon. His right hand was extended out in front of him. Zin smirked, chuckling an evil laugh. "You mortals continue seemingly without realizing that you cannot harm me." stated Zin.

"How about you shut up and come over here!" yelled Varon. "I'll slice your head right off of your shoulders!"

"How amusing," replied Zin, his smirk turning into a smile. "Oh, how I just love proving mortals wrong. They try, but cannot even imagine the sort of danger they're in."

"Enough of your talking," yelled Varon. "I'll shut that mouth of yours for good!" Suddenly, Zin disappears from where he was standing. Varon shuffles his head left and right quickly. His brown irises looked high and low for Zin. That was until he felt the chill of death race up his spine. He tilted his head slowly to his right to look behind him, and there was Zin.

His glowing red eyes piercing into the brown ocean in the eyes of Varon. Quickly, Zin launched his leg up straight at Varon, aiming for the right side of his mid-back. It was like kicking a soccer ball, only the ball was Varon's body. Varon is sent flying about ten feet until his body crashes onto the ground. But there was still energy in the force of the impact to keep Varon going.

His body hits the dirt entirely on his right side, it rolled, flipped, and bounced once it did as it continued to move fast away from Zin as if the force of the impact was running away from Zin. But finally after an additional eight feet added onto the already ten feet long impact, his body halted. He didn't stand back onto his feet, he just laid there on his front side.

Bart finally got to the last corner to execute his plan. He plants the last bit of wire into the ground as he panted from running around so much. "It's ready Forscythe," said Bart to his ragdoll companion. "I hope this works."
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Bart raced to the middle of the room, his designer boots smacks the dirt hard. Once he had finally arrived in the middle of the room, his green irises wrapped around Zin. "Hey!" yelled Bart. "Hey, you!"

Zin turned around, looking toward whatever was calling him. His red glowing eyes gazed upon Bart and the green ocean within his eyes. "We don't have to fight, you know!" Bart continued. "Can't we just settle this over some talk?"

Zin quickly disappeared from where he was standing, and reappeared right in front of Bart. As soon as Bart saw Zin appear right in front of him, he flipped backwards. "C'mon," said Bart, stepping backwards. "We don't need to fight, do we?"

"You fool," replied Zin, walking forward when Bart was walking backwards. "I am the Destroyer, I am nothing like Zion."

"Well, that's a shame..." said Bart, his needles quickly glowed blue. Right below Zin was a circle of simple sewing string with a long line of more string tied to it. This tied string traveled away from the circle of string and out towards all the corners of the room. Suddenly, the circle of string and the tied string suddenly lit up with his needles.

The entire room is engulfed by this warm enveloping light, all the tied string lifted into the air while the circle of string stood flat on the ground. Suddenly, the floating string charged towards Zin and began to circle around Zin. But once the string got near with making contact, it snapped into millions of smaller pieces. Bart's eyes widened in disbelief, his string was unable to bind Zin. His legs froze in place, unable to move them.

Zin looked down at the circle of string below his feet. "I must admit, that was quite the trap. However, " said Zin, his glowing red eyes returning to Bart. "It's over for you."
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Zin throws his right hand out in front of him. "Ingiustizia." said Zin, a incredible invisible energy suddenly escapes from his right hand and out towards Bart. He is then sent catapulting out away from Zin. Bart is sent darting away from Zin, shooting away ten feet before heavily hitting the ground right on his back.

Once he hits the ground, he rolls backward against his will and continues to do so until the back of his head whiplashes against the beige stone wall. His head thuds swift against the hard stone wall that surrounded the room, his body grabbed by the embrace of the flames that roared beside him.

That was the last thing Modello saw, before the world around him began to blur. Before the sounds around him began to fade. Before the faces he saw blurred beyond recognizing. His mind vague of any sort of thought. But once everything slowly became unrecognizable, his vision faded into black.

The End of Chapter 11,
Next Chapter:
Chapter 12: Vague Premonitions

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it ^_^

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-How that chapter SHOULD have ended-

Bart raced to the middle of the room, his designer boots smacks the dirt hard. Once he had finally arrived in the middle of the room, his green irises wrapped around Zin. "Hey!" yelled Bart. "Hey, you!"

Zin turned around, looking toward whatever was calling him. His red glowing eyes gazed upon Bart and the green ocean within his eyes. "We don't have to fight, you know!" Bart continued. "Can't we just settle this over some talk?"

Zin quickly disappeared from where he was standing, and reappeared right in front of Bart. As soon as Bart saw Zin appear right in front of him, he flipped backwards. "C'mon," said Bart, stepping backwards. "We don't need to fight, do we?"

"You fool," replied Zin, walking forward when Bart was walking backwards. "I am the Destroyer, I am nothing like Zion."

"Well, that's a shame..." said Bart, his needles quickly glowed blue with the force. Right below Zin was a circle of simple sewing string with a long line of more string tied to it. This tied string traveled away from the circle of string and out towards all the corners of the room. Suddenly, the circle of string and the tied string suddenly lit up with his needles.

The entire room is engulfed by this warm enveloping light, all the tied string lifted into the air while the circle of string stood flat on the ground. Suddenly, the floating string charged towards Zin and began to circle around Zin. Once the string made contact, it tightened over Zin's neck, choking him slowly. Zin's eyes widened in disbelief, his mind unable to grasp what was happening, either from shock or lack of oxygen to the brain. His legs froze in place, unable to move them.

Bart looked down at the circle of string below Zin's feet. "I must admit, that was quite the trap. And now, " said Bart, his eyes returning to Zin. "It's over for you." "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

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Bart throws his right hand out in front of him, and prepares to use the force. "Ingiustizia." said Bart. An incredible invisible energy suddenly escapes from his right hand and out towards Zin. He is then sent catapulting out away from Bart. Zin is sent darting away from Bart, shooting away ten feet before heavily hitting the ground right on his back.

Once he hits the ground, he rolls backward against his will and continues to do so until the back of his head whiplashes against the beige stone wall. His head thuds swift against the hard stone wall that surrounded the room, his body grabbed by the embrace of the flames that roared beside him.

That was the last thing Modello saw, before the world around him began to blur...

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What did we learn?

Don't mess with a skiller Jedi.

~Seph
"Every man is a damn fool for at least five minutes every day; wisdom consists in not exceeding the limit." -Elbert Hubbard "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

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Epic chapter! If you're wondering why I gave Bart The Force, and made Zin the one get owned a few posts up.. Well, after re-beating The Force Unleashed, I couldn't help myself.

And... wait... WEWT! The amulet of Fury finally looks like it may come down from it's 14m gp treehouse! It fell 300k or so... YES! WEWT! If it falls more, it'll crash close to my current savings for one (9.5m). Recap- Hell yes. =D

And this Void Knight quest better give an upgrade to void armour, if it doesn't... I'll be unhappy. >.<

In summary: I can only hope the future swings my way. It likely won't. >.<

-Seph
"All of us failed to match our dreams of perfection. So I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible." -William Faulkner "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

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That skillers with 99 Crafting kicks some major behind?

Well, I've had an overload on ToS: Dawn of a New World, adding in a mix of Lost Planet 2. O_o

Modello, with his blonde hair and green (mention as that's some features on Emil), must go into his Ratatosk Mode! But why would they call it that!? It's so silly sounding. D:

But let's continue to hope that your amulet does continue to crash. It's good news.

EDIT: And be optimistic! I'm sure things may look up. o:

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