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Here we are once again, back again for the... sixth time? Hello then, my name is Serene End. I'm an average person doing average things. But anyway, this is a story called Fall From Grace . It is about how the humans of Gielinor -- thought to be the most dominate race in all of the land -- have fallen from that high and are now slaves. Chapters are written and posted ~~usually once a month~~ whenever I can get to it, but I do actively preside over this thread.

Please don't go and breakededed the rules. I have enough irritation in my life and I don't need more! So, please take consideration of people's feelings into account before doing something that may seem irrational. It is HUGELY appreciated.

Should you have anything at all to say, (that is rational, mind you) don't be afraid to sound off! Suggestions, complaints, criticism, heck just about anything! I am absolutely all ears. This story's plot and setting are more than a couple of years old, past the time when all heck broke loose in the hamster ball that is RuneScape's lore. So, if you could please minimize your corrections, I'd appreciate that. Because I'm aware of much of the lore, so yeah -- do it plx~!

If you'd like, you may also read my other stories too. Do note, they are quite old so I can't excuse the errors (and horrors) you'll find.

The World in Flames
The World in Flames 2
Rays that Shine
Crimson
Living Crime

Thank you all so very much for your time and for reading! I appreciate it with all my heart. :3

Thanks again,
Serene End
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Table of Context
Introduction - Page 1, post 1
Table of Context - Page 1, post 2
Fan List and Rules - Page 1, post 4
Reporting Tablet, Accepted Bios and Achievements - Page 1, post 5
Characters - Page 1-4, post 6-post 3 (of Page 4)

Chapters

Prologue (15 posts)
Chapter 1: Listen to the Rain (21 posts)
Chapter 2: Shaken but Sure (28 posts)
Chapter 3: Decisive Blow (31 posts)
Chapter 4: Ascendance (30 posts)
Chapter 5: The Hunt for the Hunters (22 posts)
Chapter 6: The Man in the Hood (32 posts)
Chapter 7: Making Friends (32 posts)
Chapter 8: Tower Offense (43 posts)
Chapter 9: The Façade (24 posts)
Chapter 10: Confession (28 posts)
Chapter 11: The State of the World (34 posts)
Chapter 12: Pleading Insanity (30 posts)
Chapter 13: The Eyes of a God (30 posts)
Chapter 14: Tuebor (51 posts)
Chapter 15: Faraway from Home (46 posts)
Chapter 16: To Know is to Know Nothing (33 posts)
Chapter 17: Despaired (33 posts)
Chapter 18: At the Point of No Return (60 posts)
Chapter 19: The Third (48 posts)
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Chapter 20: Enemy, Familiar Friend Part 1 (74 posts)
Chapter 21: Enemy, Familiar Friend Part 2 (40 posts)
Chapter 22: Where Loyalties Lie (77 posts)
Chapter 23: A Second Wind (63 posts)
Chapter 24: Between the Truths and the Lies (60 posts)
Chapter 25: La Ma Vatem (70 posts)
Chapter 26: Carry On (129 posts)
Chapter 27: The Crossroads of a Thousand Paths (98 posts)
Chapter 28: A New World (66 posts)
Chapter 29: Death Mountain (84 posts)
Chapter 30: Angels Show Up in the Strangest Places (81 posts)
Chapter 31: King of the Whole Wide World (98 posts)
Chapter 32: The Reunion (72 posts)
Chapter 33: Rise and Fall (101 posts)
Epilogue (8 posts)
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The Fan List!
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Kitties Rule - Great fan and local master of pie and cabbage. o:

Seph - THE MEMES, JACK.

Rave N Rage - Good fan and that local 'random when he's bored' guy! O_o

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~+[Rules]+~
1. Please do not spam as it's disruptive... and kinda a bit annoying.

2. Please do not start flamming me or anyone that reads this or any other story. My fans and I are mature people, so we don't tolerate immature comments.

3. Do not create nor post controversial comments for doing this could cause a flame war and this flame spams the thread. While I welcome criticism, I don't like controversial things. So, if you have some controversy to say, please do not say it.

4. Please do not copy off other people's bios WITHOUT the permission to do so.

5. Do not be angry or sad if I do not accept your bio. Do not flame\spam this thread, me, or anyone else.

6. All other Jagex rules apply.

Remember, responsibility is something important and you are responsible for everything you do. Breaking any of these rules will lead to you getting reported. I do not hand out warnings as whatever you've done is your fault. So whatever you do, I'll report on the spot.

In other words, don't do it plz.
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30-Sep-2011 20:40:51 - Last edited on 01-Nov-2013 16:51:43 by Serene End

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=[Reporting Tablet]=
Quick find code: 49-50-480-63240485
Thread title: Fall From Grace
Page number in thread:
Name of offender:
Type of offence:

Accepted Bios
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Achievements
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30-Sep-2011 20:41:25 - Last edited on 09-Aug-2013 23:53:27 by Serene End

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~=[Protagonists]=~

Name: Raphael Béla (ra-fa-EL BAY-law)

Race: Human

Age: 18

Which Army does he fight for?: With the Imperial Palace of Governanti as one of the six members of the Ruler's Counsel, the people who help the king bear the burden of the decisions that change the course of Governanti.

Gender: Male

Weapon: His truest companion is his speed, always thinking of a good way to speed things up to end fights quickly. He wields a sword once owned by his father known as Falcon. It is a two foot long steel blade which is rather light. The cross-guard and handle are made of gold. The cross-guard has three spikes reaching out about two inches, the left side has two sides while the right has one. Raphael mainly enjoys holding it in a reversed position, but he can use it in the regular position if needed.

Appearance: Standing at about 5-feet-11-inches tall and weighs slightly less than the average weight for somebody his age. Raphael's skin is mainly pale but still has a bit color to it. His build isn't exactly muscular, in fact he's a bit skinny. His hair is silver and goes all the way down to the start of his neck. The top of his hair is flat while at the bottom it gets a bit more spiky (much like the game's hairstyle "Wild Spikes" only less crazy.) His eyes are purple and strong.

Around his neck, he wears silver dragonstone necklace that appears outside of his collar. The collar of his shirt is raised up and is closed. It looks like a diamond shape around his neck. It only reaches up to the middle of his neck. He wears a tight dark gray shirt under his long sleeved coat. The collar of that shirt lays flat at the bottom of his neck. His Azure Blue coat isn't long, only going down to the middle of his thigh. The sleeves of his coat end at the start of his forearm.
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The dark gray shirt underneath his coat goes all the way down to his hand but only for the top of his hand, the bottom side's sleeve stops at his wrist. To his middle finger, the sleeve starts to thin until it's about the size of his pinky. The end of it is kept hidden under a dragonstone ring around the start of Raphael's middle finger. His coat is buttoned closed, the buttons are made of silver. Around his waist he wears a long silver ring, in the middle of it is an inch long dragonstone.

The left side of this ring is a leather strap, tied extremely tight around the ring. This is where Raphael keeps his sword. From the silver ring to the end, his coat appears like a skirt without an opening. Much like his undershirt, his slacks are dark gray and reach down to mid-shin. His dark gray leather boots reach up to where his pants end. A dragonstone is embedded in the boots, about an inch from the top of his boots.

Personality: While firm about what he believes in, Raphael can be quite reluctant about doing some things like fighting or pursuing what he wants. Raphael hates to fight, so he only fights to defend himself. He's very easily angered, but can't quite get out what he wants to say most of the times during the times he's angry. He cares deeply about the people around him despite them mostly resenting him.

He's also quite respectful, especially to King Divus. And he is also very polite, always minding his mouth and manners. He always refers to people as 'sir' or 'ma'am' unless told not to. Mostly not able to speak his mind, if he happens to, he can forget to mind his words and may come out a bit insensitive. When he believes something, his opinion is very hard to sway. He is strong-willed and take quite a beating, from words AND blades.
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History: Shortly after Raphael was born, his mother disappeared and was never seen again. His father, Markus Béla was forced to fight as a soldier for the gods against the Lumbridge Resistance, a rebellion force against the control of the gods. Raphael was more or less raised by his mentor and his father's best friend, Malik Poena. At the age of five, Raphael was forced to become a servant around the Imperial Palace. Malik, who has been a slave since about the same age as Raphael, watched over Raphael during those times. By day, Raphael cleaned and served the gods' every whim. By night, when he was allowed to return to his home, he was trained by Malik about how to use a sword.

His father would occasionally return home after many months of fight, but would return to the battlefield only a month or so after returning. But around the time Raphael was twelve, he was told by King Divus personally that his father was killed in action. Raphael was devastated so greatly. After this event, Malik disappears from the city without a trace. Divus then begins looking out for Raphael, caring for him and protecting him like he was his own.

Eventually, at the age of fifteen, Raphael became one of the members of the Ruler's Counsel. He is the first and only ever human member of the Counsel. This is where he is truly shown malevolence from the other gods, but especially so from King Divus' son, Balor. This is where Raphael spends his days even now into the present, building an immunity to the hateful words the other gods whisper behind his back and wondering exactly where his mentor disappeared to.

Family: His father was killed in battle and his mother has been missing since giving birth to Raphael. He has no sisters or brothers and any other family members he may have are apparently "dead" according to both his father and Malik.
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Name: Elena Ortrun (el-uh-nuh AWRT-roon)

Race: Human

Age: 25

Which Army does she fight for?: She fights for the Lumbridge Resistance, the rebel force standing against the Imperial Kingdom of Governanti.

Gender: Female

Weapon: She uses archery, wielding a shortbow made of a very strong wood into the battle. At archery, she is considered to be one of the best. For arrows, she uses steel arrows with a diamond tip at the point. Elena may use a Steel Longsword to defend herself from anyone attacking her from close range.

Appearance: Standing about 5-feet-3-inches tall, Elena weighs about one-hundred and twenty pounds. Her skin is pale but it has a tan to it. Her build is strong, considering she's usually swinging a sword around almost everyday. Her hair is black and long, reaching down to her mid back. She keeps it in a braided ponytail. Her eyes are pale blue.

She wears a short-sleeved black shirt underneath a teal blue short sleeved leather coat that reaches down to about her mid-thigh. Her teal blue coat has a hood that almost always remains down unless she's around the eyes of the public. The black shirt underneath has a raised open collar, going up to about mid-cheek. The edges of the collar were trimmed by white. Strapped around her upper body is her dark brown leather quiver. Her Steel Longsword is sheathed and strapped just behind her quiver.

Around her hands and up to about the middle of her upper-arms is a black fingerless glove. The ends of the glove, from where it ends at her fingers to where it ends at her upper arm is trimmed by white. Her pants are black and long, reaching down to about mid-shin. Her black leather boots reach up to where her pants end.
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Personality: Elena is a very kind and caring person, willing to save almost anyone from the grips of harm. She is selfless and gives whatever she can to those in need. She is respectful but can easily speak her mind. She can be stubborn at times. But she is incredibly protective of Uriel Sera and considers him her brother. In whatever situation, Elena has a clear sense of what is right and what is wrong. And she is an aggressive pursuer of justice. Due to this strong sense of justice, she holds an enormous amount of indignation against Balor for his injustices.

History: Without the guidance of anyone, Elena raised herself and taught herself everything she knows. She lived among an independent village not under the control of the gods out in the blazing hot heart of the desert. Her home, a small little wooden remains of a building as she lived in complete poverty. With the little scraps of money she had, she bought herself of bow and arrow set. She used this weapon to hunt animals to keep herself fed.

Once she matured to the age of nineteen, she began to travel around the world. As she traveled the world, she saw many different people and saw the fear, the absolute hopelessness that gripped every single person she saw. She returned to Lumbridge after a year of traveling. She was a lot different than what she once was. As she wandered the crowded streets of the town, a faint cry for help down an alleyway caught her attention.
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