Being an avid Zamorakian and lore fan, I decided to write an origin story for my character, based on my name. I would love to hear lorehound opinions on this
This is my first lore written so please only constructive criticism
Trimmed Completionist on 3/10/17 in memory of my father. Striving for IFB and True Trim.
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The Story of Zamorak Soul...
When the Mahjarrat Zamorak ascended to godhood, Death made a mistake.. instead of destroying the soul that Zamorak had to forfeit
in order to ascend, Death accidentally let it escape. Zamorak, being the lord of chaos and a revolutionist, had a soul that did not want to go down without a fight... the wandering, severed Soul of Zamorak had a consciousness, decided It did NOT want to be destroyed, It wanted to live and thrive. To do this, the Soul had to gain power, and It knew just how. The Soul began to gain his power, but in a dark way. The Soul began to cannibalize, by devouring the souls of the enemies it defeated... first it was small enemies, such as rats, birds, ect. As the Soul became stronger, more powerful, he graduated to killing stronger monsters, he became powerful enough to possess a body for himself, but he did not want just any body... it wanted the BEST body, and a unique body. The Soul began to kill demons, gathering and devouring mass amounts of demonic ashes to give Itself a demonic presence, a foul demonic warp that would allow it to create a body like no other.... The Soul halted it's killing spree to become invisible, and It waited, It waited and watched for years and years because It wanted the perfect body. Eventually, the Soul saw the perfect body. The Soul saw an adventurer, who was incredibly skilled, one of the most in the land (completionist), and was perfect to possess. As the adventurer was in combat with a great monster, the soul snuck behind it and as the adventurer struck the killing blow, the soul devoured the soul of the great monster and used the fresh energy to possess the adventurer. The demonic warp that the Soul had attained allowed the Soul to warp the body to it's own desires. The Soul turned the adventurer's skin as black as night, warped the eyes to a glowing, infernal red, and even used it's demonic taint to create wings. With the perfect body, the Soul wanted MORE power...
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The Soul began to kill more and more creatures, and went to Slayer Masters to get assignments for more hard to find creatures. The Soul's rampage focused on the most evil creatures it could find, for it wanted to warp their soul energy into armor. It finally found it's way into the deepest reaches of Morytania, and the warped souls of 6 legendary heroes was the energy it needed to forge it's own dark armor, fused with the Soul's very body. it used the talents it had learned to transmute and warp the energy and fuse it into it's very skin, creating a dark, malevolent suit of armor. The Soul, it's perfect body complete, now continues to gain power...
~The Soul of Zamorak
Trimmed Completionist on 3/10/17 in memory of my father. Striving for IFB and True Trim.
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Wow Zamo This is a great backstory. I really like how you made it kinda match what you look like right now. And there I was thinking you are just a super sweet guy - who knew you're really an evil monster!!! Hehe The whole story was really fun to read.