Fill in my memory lapse please, are the Star Summoner (and the H1 one) new stories? Or are they before this?
Well, regardless, I'm going to go check them out.
Edit: Nevermind. Those are some of your older ones. I'm heading over to the ones SSST ones or whatever they're called.
--Guard
17-Jun-2008 05:01:29
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17-Jun-2008 05:05:53
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After Slay1820 (Xen) said on the SD that it was painful for him to write your review, it started a conversation about you and your abilities. I told him how you were one of the fastest, if not the fastest, learner I've seen on the forums, and he said this:
He has enormous potential. That's for certain. The problem is, he needs to learn some tricks of his own that make his stories unique, and needs to learn to stop getting his characters into impossible situations.
'tis why an outline is good.
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So, don't let your spirits be dampened by the review from his guild. Keep writing, and you will most definitely get better and eventually be one of the best.
--Guard
17-Jun-2008 18:54:32
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