THIS is how good I´d like my stories!
I´m truthfully impressed about this- if this was a whole novel, I´d go buy it.
This story has given me new inspiration to write a story, which I haven´t done since early December!
Maybe would be time for my first Stories story... great job Dreamweaver, this is incredible!
Mattan, your comments are most kind! Thanks you so much. I am very glad that you felt inspired to write something of your own, and I did see your entry in Mod Kathy's story forum contest. Good for you and good luck with that!
Should you wish to take a look at any of my other work here, I maintain two threads. "Dreamweaver's Assorted Tales" (49-50-691-49415905) is my collection of short stories, most of which are very short and in a similar style to this. Alternatively, "Nildi of Keldagrim" (49-50-957-32282822) is a significantly darker and more substantial tale.
Thanks again for your kind words. I much appreciate it.