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Serene End
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Hax0r! That was mine!! -.- (destiny has denied me my shine to fame :| )

Your rain coat has strange powers too? Wow, that must be one strange raincoat (that's pretty hard to control may I add!). Hmmm...must be in the fabric :P

~Biomaster7
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23-Apr-2009 13:48:58 - Last edited on 23-Apr-2009 13:50:10 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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My rain coat's only power is lacking a hood and letting my head get wet :( I'm reading the chapter right now...

Sweeeeeeet! Kvetch killed Deus... even if he did come back :P Awesome fight scene, puts even my best fights in Soul calibur 4 to shame!

Oh and if there is a part 2 (or another story later) I'm already working on a bio... but I'm trying to decide between an uber-narcissistic assassin named Vezyfher or a 9 year old Icyene girl named Sylphia...

24-Apr-2009 03:36:25 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2009 03:36:39 by Ark Von Doom

Serene End
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No, this will be the final topping on The World in Flames series. I am however thinking of the next story. A story, I believe I had planned originally right after the thought of Rays that Shine's storyline came into the picture. I already know most of the storyline, characters and all. So, no fear of Writer's Block (I hardly get it nevertheless :P )

Though of course there will be changes to the character line-up since the main protagonist was Angelo and the main antagonist was Alberto. But, I've already got ideas for characters to replace the characters taken out. (thank you drawing pencil). I guess since I'm talking about it. I would like to see your opinions regarding storyline. >_>

Main Idea 1: The Kingdoms of Asgarnia, Misthalin, Kandarin are countries at war for each country hates one another.

Main Idea 2: Kandarin is ruled by a race known as the Albali. This race has been hated for a very long time because of another Albali (originally Alberto) nearly destroyed the Human Race. Misthalin is rule by the Human Race. Their emperor is the Nike family. The current Nike family member in charge is Salomon Nike. Asgarnia is ruled by what appear to be Demons who appear to look like Humans (yep, the Demons have returned :P )

Main Idea 3: Another major war going on in-between the main war that the kingdoms are involved is the Great Assassin Wars; a war between Assassins and Assassin Hunters (I'm sure the name tells you what they do :P )

Main Idea 4: Their is an Assassin that Salomon hates the most, bearing the name "The Crimson Reaper".

Main Idea 5: The story will be taken place with the Great Assassin's War.

Main Idea 6: The year is during the new Sixth Age, the Age of the Assassins.

Main Idea 7: Think of the Misthalin people to be those rich snobby people. Salomon firmly believes that his people are holy and the rest outside his kingdom are evil, unholy 'creatures' as he calls them. So, upon this thought, he nicknamed his country "The Holy Country".
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24-Apr-2009 13:44:23 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2009 14:03:37 by Serene End

Serene End
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Main Idea 8: There is a group of Assassins known as "The Raven Reapers".

I think that's it. I had originally called this story Crimson. But, I'm not sure if the title has been taken. Sooo...I guess I'll have to think a little bit more. Oh well, I'm pretty good with title names :P .

I might edit this post if I do remember any other main detail that I forgot to point out.

P.S: Ark, simply think now that I got the story up. Who would fit into it more? :o

P.S.S: I find it rather appropriate to say that I go into rain without a raincoat. I like the feeling of rain :) .

~Biomaster7
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24-Apr-2009 13:47:00 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2009 16:02:19 by Serene End

Seph
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Lemme guess, She has a big Nike swoosh on her flag, right?


A pair of Nike shoes?



Does she even sponser Nike in Marathons?! Or is it Vise Versa?!



Who knew that Greek goddesses would be so intrested in shoes...



I bet her motto is "Just Do It - Then Win it"



~Wigwam
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24-Apr-2009 16:42:23 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2009 16:43:14 by Seph

Serene End
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Well, maybe she likes Nike shoes! But she came first so the shoe factory is stealing copyright! How am I suppose to know? I'm just a young person with a keyboard right by her. O_o

I think my shoes are Nikes too *checks shoes* They got that strange check like mark on them so I guess they are.

Gee..if I have to, I'll change it. >.>

*starts surfing around for new names*

Hmmm..I'll worry about Nike later. Right now, I've got to get to typing biographies for the other characters. Salomon isn't getting a biography, he's not special enough.

~Biomaster7
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the beginning...

24-Apr-2009 16:48:40 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2009 17:02:18 by Serene End

Ark Von Doom

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Assassin war! Wow I don't need to make any bios, I have soooo many assassins :p

List:

Heinreich Kvetch: Already used :p

V*zyfher Alainbal: A narcissistic elven assassin with a Mimicirion (Chelsea Ricotta) as his pact-partner. He has the bizarre power of Life-Necromancy.

Dopple: A Doppleganger assassin with the ability to change into any man, woman, animal, or stinky shoe. He has the mischevous attitude of a small child.

Tony da Squeeze: A sleazy human assassin with a Jersey accent. He is also an arms dealer and has a variety of legendary weapons, few of which he can actually use.

And that doesn't include: Vergil (Vampire)(pact-partner Archibald the Greater Skeletal Wyvern), Devian (Human) (pact partner: The Blood Titan), Nivu (Elf)(pact partner: Spirit Jelly) , and Lawliot (Human)(pact partner: Guair the Brutal Earth Dragon).

"Assassin Hunters" or things close to that I have are Utah Septius (Has an enchanted Colt-magnum (one of the only ones in the world) with lots of different bullet types like dragonfire, freeze, lightning, net, acid, flash, smoke, laser beam, dark matter... the list is huge) and Johannes Pikter (One of the worlds best swordsmen who has two longswords with razor sharp wires attached to each hilt so that they have massive range and can do damage anywhere within that range). Both are human.


All that's left for me is to pick one :p

Because it bleeps his name no matter what I do up there the actual name is Vezyfher

26-Apr-2009 01:07:35 - Last edited on 26-Apr-2009 02:01:13 by Ark Von Doom

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